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Summer Betrayal

I listened as your soul broke fragile vows, like wind in midnight trees it chilled my heart. As wept medallion leaves upon the boughs late roses hushed in seance did impart that dim would grow the saffron afternoons, midori secrets soon to disappear as left was I with shame of scarlet runes and pewter shadows whispered in my ear. Across the firmament I felt the ache, though silent came the smoke of summer's fire of marigolds and honey we would take, now sodden ashes in October mire. The wisps of coral memories now fade; in umber will the autumn notes be played. 10/17/17

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Date: 3/10/2025 9:33:00 PM
Dear Dale, your sonnet stirs my heart and imagination with beautiful melancholy. Vivid imagery and rich metaphors brings me into the bittersweet scene with ease. Congratulations for your success in Sara’s contest. It’s an honor the share the podium with you, my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/11/2025 8:39:00 AM
Hi, Susan. Thanks very much for your kind words.
Date: 11/11/2017 8:44:00 PM
Wonderfully poignant and melancholy write, Dale - congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/11/2017 8:47:00 PM
Thanks, Greg.
Date: 11/11/2017 8:26:00 PM
Such a beautifully written Sonnet, Dale. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Sandra
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/11/2017 8:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra.
Date: 11/11/2017 11:19:00 AM
GREAT poem, lovely and bittersweet. Congrats on your win, Dale. Janice
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Date: 11/11/2017 11:19:00 AM
GREAT poem, lovely and bittersweet. Congrats on your win, Dale. Janice
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/11/2017 11:37:00 AM
Thanks so much, Janice.
Date: 11/11/2017 10:33:00 AM
Superb. Congrats on a winning poem, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/11/2017 10:40:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 11/11/2017 4:27:00 AM
Excellent Dale, congrats :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/11/2017 8:03:00 AM
Thanks, Gary!
Date: 10/17/2017 11:45:00 AM
your use of colour is sublime Dale, an absolute joy to read your poem today:-) hugs jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/17/2017 11:49:00 AM
Thanks, Jan! You're awesome!
Date: 10/17/2017 11:45:00 AM
Terrific, colorful sonnet Dale. Loved the first verse, well done...
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/17/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Charlie!

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