Summer Day -The Tanaga Style

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~Summer Day~ (Tanaga) Pretty butterflies soaring Tiny seedlings are growing Red roses on trellis climbing Summer day hot weather bring. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2011 May.14.2016 ~Authors Notes: "The Tanaga" is a Filipino poetry form or style. The Filipino equivalent of a Japanese Haiku is the "Tanaga".

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Mick Talbot

Date: 11/28/2017 12:45:00 PM

Great format, done a few myself, but apart from you I've not found anyone else on ps using this form. As you no doubt are aware it is an ancient form and well worth the effort. I enjoyed yours, hope find some of mine. Looking forward to some more from you. :) PS: The photos, just WOW!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/15/2016 8:56:00 AM

I'm not familiar with the form but I like its simplicity.