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Summer

Sun is losing height, no longer will burn
Umbrellas furled, hats now worn.
Moon will be rising to greet the night,
Making our way home we look a sight
Eyes red, caused by the salt, hair wet from the sea
Remembering though a perfect day, just you and me.

Penned 01/10/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/12/2014 10:29:00 PM
Nice acrostic, Seren! ;) xxxx D.
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Date: 10/4/2014 6:37:00 PM
this piece really blossoms warm in the mind beautifully penned seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/4/2014 7:44:00 PM
Hello Liam thanks for stopping by.....Seren
Date: 9/30/2014 7:31:00 PM
Love the day at the beach...I am so sad for you Seren. I just lost my Wheaton Terrier two months ago...hugs Tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/30/2014 8:17:00 PM
yes
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/30/2014 8:15:00 PM
You had an Irish wheaten terrier? Wow they are great dogs, my friend had one.....thanks for comment...Seren
Date: 9/30/2014 6:39:00 PM
aww summer sweet ;) nice acrostic
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/30/2014 7:12:00 PM
Hi Casarah, thanks for stopping by and commenting, feeling a bit low after Tilly dying on Monday. So empty and quiet now at home...Seren.

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