Malabika Ray Choudhury | + Follow Poet |
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Summer

                                      l
                                         e  
                                    a 
                                            v 
                                        e 
                                            s
                                              basking
                                   in sun
                           flowers
                                                      share
                           short-lived
                                          warmth
                                            trees
                                            scatter
                                         pine 

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                                       n e
                                         s

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/16/2025 12:31:00 PM I think this one deserved a number placement in the current contest. well done, Mala. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 7/6/2025 1:28:00 AM I like both the 'summer' imagery and the shape, dear Mala :) Congratulations on your top placement. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/6/2025 5:50:00 AM Thank you, Dear Paul. I appreciate your comment so much. I am not a very good Haiku writer, and no experience in Shape poems. Inspiration from a master like you uplifts my spirit. Best wishes to you for all your achievements.

thriveni c mysore Date: 7/2/2025 6:56:00 PM this is beautiful write, congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!! Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/3/2025 7:06:00 AM Thank you, Dear Thriveni, for reading my poem. Really appreciate your encouraging words. Can't wait to read yours.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 7/2/2025 7:17:00 AM Nice one Mala. Congratulations! :) Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/3/2025 7:05:00 AM Thank you, Dear Linda, for reading my poem. Truly appreciate. Yours must be a brilliant one - can't wait to read.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/1/2025 9:55:00 PM I really like yours, Mala. Big congrats Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/3/2025 7:04:00 AM Thank you, Dear Andrea, for your sweet comment. Really appreciate you reading my poem. I am trying to learn "shape" poems. Can't wait to read yours - always my inspiration.

Valsa George Date: 7/1/2025 9:35:00 PM Love your shaped haiku. Congratulations on your first place win, dear Mala. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/3/2025 7:02:00 AM Thank you, Dear Valsa. I am trying to learn "shape" poems. Can't wait to read yours - always my inspiration.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/27/2025 3:59:00 PM Hello Mala, i like the way you have done this of the poem. Love & Friendsship, Darlene/ Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/28/2025 10:31:00 AM Hello mal, i am doing fine. I have a cat now. i got her on Tuesday. Her name is Stormy she is 5 yeas old. She is a treasure. Love & Friendship,/ Darlene/ Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/28/2025 4:55:00 AM Thank you, Darlene. Really appreciate your comments. How are you doing?

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/24/2025 1:23:00 PM I enjoyed reading your fun "Summer" Haiku write and shape. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away.......... Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/24/2025 3:49:00 PM Thank you, Paula. Learning how to create a Shape pome.

Tom Woody Date: 6/24/2025 6:29:00 AM Sigh! Pine cones and pine needles. Of course, in a pine forest they're actually quite enchanting, just not in my yard. awesome shape haiku Mal Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/24/2025 6:50:00 AM Ha ha, Tom. I like the shape of pine-cones, they look mysterious to me - not in my yard, but like looking and touching them, scattered in the area. I have no experience in shape-poems, trying to learn. Thank you, Tom ~ Mala