Sultry Goodbyes

Late August and the hot air drifts over the lake the sky glowers striking a contrast black to gray soon, very soon, the lake with be thundered awake and the heat mirage with dissolve in disarray. The last of children's giggles will echo ghostly through the woods at water's edge mixed with sparrow song. Pink skinned lovers chilled will be but a memory and their cuddling brought indoors where it belongs The garden's done, each tomato plant has yielded scorched by the heat, fields and forest long for Autumn, praise the heat of summer for it raised the corn fields, raise a glass from the yield of the apple and the plum. Say goodbye to August with a gentle kiss on the breeze for the wild geese are flying, flying through the changing trees.
8/30/13
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Davis Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:22 PM
Debbie This is a very nice tribute to summers end. The imagery and description that you created pulls me in and takes me on this journey. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Shakespeare poem.
A  Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 12:08 PM
Nice win............... DG...................SKAT
A   Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 11:49 AM
congrats.. DG... xox..PD
Johnson Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 6:14 PM
Congratulations Debbie. I liked your poem. Hate to see fall going so fast because we know how long winter lasts. Love, Joyce
May Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 7:57 AM
beautiful write...congrats on your win
Manassian Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 4:29 PM
Debbie...I like how the words flow from one line to the other with your use of punctuation....BEAUTIFUL! I saw the images in my head! :) I'm hopeless at Sonnets! Why not sponsor a competition on this? XOXOXO
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 5:11 PM
you are getting so good at sonnets, Deb. think how far we both have come since 2010 when we met each other! btw, why didn't you do an acrostic for me? I am sure you would have done well in it!
George   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 5:48 AM
Ah! You have captured summer's end so beautifully. Lainie PS, I met my daughter in BC in July.Words can never convey the experience.
Richards Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 7:39 PM
This is how I often feel the first time I see a yellow school bus arrive, after a lovely summer season. Melancholy and rather sad........sad and lovely all mixed with strange emotion. Nicely done!
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