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Right before a suicide Might something have been said To keep that person on this side Of life, instead of dead? We hear about the famous ones Who seemed to have it made, Yet even they succumbed despite The talents they displayed. Inside each person’s head there is A privileged domain Which holds a private treasury Of suffering and pain. I guess that when it overflows Its owner cannot cope And suicide is what takes place When anguish crushes hope.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/18/2018 6:18:00 PM
As the Talmud (Sanhedrin) famously says: 'He who saves one life, it's as if he has saved the whole world.' Kudos to you for writing this -- and may the words of your first stanza be realized and fulfilled again and again … and again … ! Gershon
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Date: 6/14/2018 2:19:00 PM
Don't let it be said that you shy away from any subject matter. You have delved into this darkness where sometimes there's no light. It's amazing all we've ever learned is suicide's not right.
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Date: 6/12/2018 11:20:00 AM
Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem. I have known many who have committed suicide. It is the most selfish act of all. Brilliantly written, Ilene!
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Date: 6/14/2018 2:14:00 PM
I'm sorry Daniel, I don't see it as selfish at all. Someone is in extreme pain emotionally or otherwise so much that they just get to a point and bam. Suicide is no answer, waking tomorrow is. But then the world is still right there. Pray for us all. Peace. :)
Date: 6/12/2018 7:57:00 AM
Amazingly well written and thought provoking about a topic really not talked much about. Another wonderful poem Ilene! Well done!
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Date: 6/11/2018 11:09:00 PM
A thoughtful write powerfully presented.. another wisdom piece, Ilene! Come see this old friend...
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Date: 6/11/2018 8:17:00 PM
Suicide takes courage and determination, and I doubt any amount of talking, for some, will ever change their minds. A close friend of mine some years ago hanged himself and left no indication why. Some things only God knows. A profound poem you have here, my dear Ilene. / M
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Date: 6/11/2018 5:47:00 PM
A sad verse but written so well, I worked with someone who took his own life and he was always laughing and joking, there were no indications' that he was suffering in any way. But then we don't know whats going on inside someone's mind, he was definitely in a dark place, if only he had spoken up and sought help. Tom
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Date: 6/11/2018 4:47:00 PM
Such a tragic end to a life Ilene and their loved ones are left thinking ... if only I'd done or said that things could have been different:-( hugs Jan xx
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