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Suggestive Thinking

Take a deep breath relax I’ll loosen your straps Feel the warmth of love Shining high above Yes, that’s a nice big smile It will be ok in a while Try laughing now and then Face the truth again Crack a joke, make peace Such a great release Pen someone a nice poem you’ll feel right at home Ignore them long shadows It’s ok to be shallow Your not eight foot three It’s only imaginary Come back down to earth Forget lies you spread I click my fingers, awake! No more need to fake By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 4/11/2021 4:04:00 PM

Love it David PEN SOMEONE A NICE POEM Even if the recipient is yourself you never know it may just help And you might also find Nice isn't all that bad after all

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/12/2021 9:54:00 AM

Likewise David My poems are just my own personal thoughts Not a political party party broadcast or meant to convert anyone to my way of thinking Who am i to say i am right So long as i believe i am not lying or can hopefully back what i say up with a few basic facts

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/12/2021 3:47:00 AM

Pen anything Christopher, pen everything, just don’t expect people to sit back, and believe delusional propaganda without a response, I like to pen my inner feelings for my own release, not to indoctrinate others, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 4/10/2021 2:45:00 AM

PS could use hypnosis treatment on a few. Your writes are always entertaining with a point. Good write, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/10/2021 4:27:00 AM

Heya Jenna, yes indeed a small few, are indeed under “the influence” of inflated compulsive lies, and a little check back into reality is no harm whatsoever, cheers David