Suddenly the Bird Sings

suddenly the bird sings, quite suddenly, startling
the stranger-to-the-dawn of day; he thinks the bird
is where the bird shouldn’t be; but knowingly,
with amusement, having quite habitually heard
the bird tweet, as the morning sun stretches its wings,
the wife informs the stranger to the waning dusk,
“oh dear husband, the bird sings from the tree,”
but he must widen the slats of the levolor blinds,
to open his eyes, to the world that exists above
his office in the split level basement. where did he think
the melody resounded from - the deck? no,
the great by and by, the bluest sky, the sun’s rays…
its hazy, at best. the mind needs a rest…startled
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Rodgers Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 11:10 AM
Dear Kim, what a masterpiece—delicate, profound, and so alive with meaning. Congratulations on POTD! Your words awaken the mind and heart, like that sudden bird singing. Beautifully done! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 1:00 PM
You are always so uplifting! I appreciate you so!
Fowler Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Love this and see it had a huge impact on others as well. Nice one and congratulations Kim. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 1:00 PM
Thank you, Linda! Glad so many liked it!
Challender Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 12:26 AM
Great descriptive POTD. Loved the stranger-to-the-dawn of day. Well done :) M.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 6:11 AM
LOL…thank you!
Toney Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 9:11 PM
Kim, I love the humor of your referring to your “dear husband” as “the stranger-to-the-dawn of day” and “the stranger to the waning dusk.” :-) Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 6:12 AM
Thank you, Mark…lol
Greenhough Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 8:26 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Bird's beautiful songs are a joy to hear. This happy poem is uplifting with rhythm in its words.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 6:12 AM
So glad it was uplifting!
Nicole Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 7:17 PM
Simple moments are beautiful, indeed. As the melody lingers, it brings inner happiness. Birds are so elegant and graceful. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 6:34 AM
Thank you, Brandy!
Hind Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 5:44 PM
So beautiful - congrats on POTD! I loved this, written like only you can - <3 :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 6:34 AM
You are so sweet, Paige! Thank you!
La France Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 1:37 PM
Kim, such a beautiful moving poem, I loved it a lot, and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor~
Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 6:35 AM
And I send you a lot of love, sweet Constance! xx
Rone Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 12:44 PM
Kim - Always look forward to your submissions. I'm a fan and this poem is one if the reasons why. Congratulations on your POTD. Best -Ken
Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 6:36 AM
I appreciate you! Thank you!
Tor Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 11:24 AM
Kim congratulations on this lovely Poetry of yours receiving POTD such a high Honor for you to receive. Again Congratulations and well deserved...
Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 6:36 AM
Thank you, Mike! Hugs
M  Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 10:22 AM
Sweet poem Kim! Congratulations on POTD! Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 11:05 AM
Thank you, Deb!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 9:12 AM
Lovely poem. Congrats on your POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 11:05 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Buehler Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 8:59 AM
A captivating poem, Kim! Congratulations on POTD. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 11:04 AM
Thank you so much, Evelyn!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 7:35 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed your creative write. We can find many things to write about as our day goes on. Have a blessed day with your win.................
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 11:04 AM
We sure can! Let’s keep it fresh! Hugs, Paula!
Martin Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 6:42 AM
I like the depth of this poem. It's obviously so much more than a simple "bird poem on many levels. Thought-provoking indeed. Kudos & write on, Terrell
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 11:04 AM
Thank you, Terrell!
Martin Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 6:43 AM
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January 8, 2025 at 5:29 AM
Hi Kim I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem, congratulations on being chosen for the POTD. xx
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 11:03 AM
Thank you, John!
Gifford Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 3:56 AM
Enjoyed your poem Kim, it was a great read. Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a wonderful day.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 4:23 AM
Thank you, Zyrool!
Elliott Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 2:47 AM
Fantabulous bird poem, Kim. A great selection POTD. Bravissimo! Enjoy your special poetry day. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 4:23 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Jones Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 2:33 AM
Kim what a charming write! Enjoyed! Congratulations on potd!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 4:22 AM
Thank you, Karen!
Kitchin Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 2:30 AM
Kim, a sweet poem, I love to hear the birds sing early in the morning. Congratulations on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 4:22 AM
Thank you, Tania! You and me poetry-sis!
Andresen Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 1:54 AM
- A lovely poem, Kim - Many little birds on the bird feeder ... but they don't sing ... fighting for food through the cold winter - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 4:21 AM
I may not hear any today…soo cold. Thank you, Anne-Lise!
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January 8, 2025 at 1:38 AM
How I love to hear birds singing in the trees Kim, I really enjoyed this humorous read. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 4:21 AM
Thanks, Beryl! Yes, I love my mornings, especially in the Spring!
Cunningham Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 12:32 AM
Enjoyed the humour in your verse Kim. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 4:20 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Wolf Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 8:50 PM
This combination of so many different styles of poesy is an absolute treat, Kim. FAVE, FAVE, FAVE. ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 4:20 AM
Oh my! Thank you, Gershon!
Crandall Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 7:37 PM
I'm glad this (your?) husband heard a bird and got a rest. This poem took me out of my room and into the tree, and the great sky, and the blue by and by, a better place to be, I think your poem just saved me a shrink.
Crandall Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 7:54 PM
He needs to get out more often :-))
Rodrigues Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 7:51 PM
Smiling! Yes, this poem was inspired by yesterday morning. I got a kick out of my husband trying to figure out where the bird was. :)
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