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By the pond, gloomy thoughts fail me
As I linger to watch ivory shadows drift on--
Elegant  their agile movements  along  water ‘s trail
Different from the restless gait of my body,
With a spine drooping low as duskfall ebbs:

Out of wonder,  my bleak eyes marvel
At a bird-dance rivering unto night’s harmony,
Where flutters of plume bounce sublime
Like velvet outlines robed in pearled wings.

Through this glide, I ache for hearth’s peace
Where trials seek a caress of kin's affinity,
That lounging around  to feed my arrogance,
Swans suddenly whirl around me , gentle as moon’s climb...

How I, enlightened by this warmth find  bliss
Till I stride past the pond and race home to my flock.


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Re- Post 6/23/2019
John Hamilton's  NA Re-Run Contest
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Originally written 4/19/2019
For Suddenly Swans Challenge
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/27/2019 9:14:00 AM
Wonderful write Nette, hard to believe this received an N/A, such a beautiful write!
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Date: 4/25/2019 5:06:00 AM
Lovely seasonal description of such grace, Nette, their fly-thru is happening here right now too...lovely!
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Date: 4/22/2019 2:44:00 PM
Lovely imagery here; you take me right to them, those swans. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/21/2019 2:50:00 AM
Your imagery is exquisite, my friend! Lovely as usual. Good luckin Maureen's contest.
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Date: 4/20/2019 3:48:00 PM
Nice to read one of yours after long years, nette.
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Date: 4/20/2019 1:57:00 PM
- Really beautiful, best wishes in the contest Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/20/2019 12:19:00 PM
Wow, what a beautiful poem this is! Well written Nette! :)
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Date: 4/20/2019 10:57:00 AM
'Lounging around to flaunt an obstinate grimace'... I love this line. Great poem, Nette.
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Date: 4/20/2019 9:28:00 AM
Eloquent! We learn some sort of epiphany from creatures. Nice twist here!
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Date: 4/20/2019 9:27:00 AM
You are so beautifully inclined Nette, Happy Easter love, xo
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Date: 4/20/2019 8:58:00 AM
A joy to read Nette, so well written as always. Good luck. Happy Easter. Tom.
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Date: 4/20/2019 8:12:00 AM
Ivory shadows..quiet in night's harmony..swans suddenly dart , gentle as moon’s climb...great imagery my friend..well written, as always, Nette.
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