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Swans As God's Creatures

Delighted by birds’ coloring books Awed with stories on biblical fowls of the air… There’s my special child, unperturbed Eyes glued to a science book he’s trying to comprehend. In a guessing game, He’s asked: “What birds are these? Identify using these clues: Indeed faithful to mate for life; male is called a cob, female partner’s name is pen; they have a baby cygnet... As God’s creatures, they are highly intelligent and remember who has been kind to them.” Suddenly... “Swans,” he shouted with glee Midst his spastic flapping gestures. In exhilarating triumph we all bask in his lingering swan-chorus: "Who made all the swans so beautiful... God* in heaven above."
*Isaiah 43:15 I am the LORD, your Holy One, the creator..., your King. April 17, 2019 9th place, "Suddenly Swans" Premier Poetry Contest Sponsored by Maureen McGreavy; judged on 4/26/2019.

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Date: 4/28/2019 10:11:00 PM
This is so sweet Beata. I enjoyed this contest. I'm very happy to see this lovely poem on Mo's winners list! Congratulations on your deserving win! xxoo
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Date: 4/28/2019 8:37:00 AM
I so enjoyed this one! You have captured childhood wonder and served it up scrumptiously sweet in this piece, congratulations for your win, and thank you Beata, xomo!
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