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Suddenly Swans

My fried anxieties and crisped lonely would unite in my sleep's repeat nightmares where a roster of random monsters pursued their viewed, vile end of me. My pulsing terrors urged I fast run but my feet always turned to absurd concrete, freezing me caught as monsters qued for fleshy-chews. Then came you with blue eyes sparkling love-shades. In time, you subdued my frantic bits and wooed me spooned in shared sleep. There, my dreams altered to tame, chiffon waters where I sat, posed, upon a beautiful swan who gracefully glided me happily beside wondrous, sister swans. Suddenly, you, yes, you suddenly turned my monsters to swans who fulfill me in dreamy captures as we sleep clasped in love as depth-cast. Nightly, swans sail me thru morns detailed in dawn’s hue by love's truth. Regal swans grace my dream-phased sleep because you love-chased me. John Hamilton 2019 Free Verse Contest Written - April 13, 2019

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Date: 1/7/2020 10:16:00 PM
Blessings and congrats on your win in John's contest, CayCay - keep on writing, my friend, and thank you for sharing. Blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 1/5/2020 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/5/2020 2:36:00 PM
You and I both entered free verse based on LOVE and real life experience!! Congrats to you, sweetie Pie. I am so glad to see you on this winner list. Soupmail.
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:43:00 PM
CayCay congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:41:00 PM
Congrats Cay Cay on another great write, and a win in my best of 2019 contest!
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Date: 6/2/2019 11:41:00 AM
CayCay, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write ~
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Date: 5/31/2019 4:44:00 PM
A beautiful romantic verse, CayCay, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/10/2019 1:25:00 PM
Hello Cay-Cay, I find this poem to be romantic. Well done.Have a a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/11/2019 2:07:00 PM
Cay-Cay how do I reach you? I could not find your name on Soup Mail? Please let me know. Thank you.
Date: 4/27/2019 7:12:00 AM
A poem with twist. Mmm spooning and swooning. Its a great poem and so romantic. Love . Me
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Date: 4/19/2019 5:24:00 PM
wow, Caycay, you created a beautiful tribute to true love with this gem. I especially loved the last two stanzas It just got better and better as I read it. the way you described his blue eyes and the monsters turning to swans . Hey, I miss you, sweetie. Tried calling a few times and sent you emails. I sure hope you are ok. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/19/2019 5:24:00 PM
and a fave!
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Date: 4/18/2019 3:41:00 PM
'Regal swans grace my dream-phased sleep because you love-chased me.' I adore the way you ended this. I love the romance in this lovely poem CayCay. I wrote mine with the swans in love. This is a premier contest so I hold little hope of getting on her list, but I think yours will. Hugs and Easter blessings my friend. I called you this morn. xxoo
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Date: 4/18/2019 5:10:00 AM
This is a wonderful image of swans and a positive swan song. I enjoyed that. Thank you for sharing. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 4/17/2019 5:06:00 PM
The grace and beauty of swans is such a pleasing sight my friend. Your verses illustrate that light and beauty vanquishes the dark.. A fav.. a true gem..
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Date: 4/17/2019 9:58:00 AM
Cool piece on the power of love to chase away our demons.
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Date: 4/17/2019 4:05:00 AM
Very beautiful with internal rhyme, CayCay:)
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Date: 4/14/2019 12:06:00 PM
Any time you dream of swans its bound to be a graceful peaceful dream Cay. Its beautifully rendered and ready for a win. Hope your day is great this Sunday Love xo ps thank you for catching my typo and for reading my poetry.
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Date: 4/14/2019 10:00:00 AM
CayCay, this is quite wonderful, it reminded me a poem I wrote, that was more of a short story a long time ago about a magical swan who came to me in a dream, that poem along with many others got destroyed by accident and I have wished to re-create it, but it is hard to re-create a past poem, to find the mood again, at least it is for me ~
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Date: 4/14/2019 7:21:00 AM
Lovely write my friend...you were always a beautiful swan CayCay...happy swan endings...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 4/13/2019 6:03:00 PM
It's so nice to be around people who make us better. I find if I lay off the pistachio ice cream at bed time, I have less nightmares. Go figure. Have a great day.
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