SUDDENLY SWANS

For Timothy Lee
My fried anxieties and crisped lonely would unite in my sleep's repeat nightmares where a roster of random monsters pursued their viewed vile end of me. My pulsing terrors urged I run fast but my feet always turned to absurd concrete, freezing me caught by monsters queued for fleshy chews. Then came you with blue eyes sparkling love shades and a grin that could persuade. In time, you subdued my frantic bits and wooed me spooned in shared sleep. In your arms my nightmares soon altered, changing to tame, chiffon waters where I sat, posed, upon a beautiful swan who gracefully glided me to happiness beside wondrous, sister swans. You, yes - your love, turned my monsters to swans who fulfill me in dreamy captures as we sleep clasped in love's depth cast. Nightly, swans sail me thru morns detailed in dawn’s hue by love’s truth. Regal swans grace my dream phased sleep because you love chased me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Barden Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 10:16 PM
Blessings and congrats on your win in John's contest, CayCay - keep on writing, my friend, and thank you for sharing. Blessings! :o) <3
Roper Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 3:44 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 2:36 PM
You and I both entered free verse based on LOVE and real life experience!! Congrats to you, sweetie Pie. I am so glad to see you on this winner list. Soupmail.
Chiri Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 1:43 PM
CayCay congratulations on your win!;)
Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 1:41 PM
Congrats Cay Cay on another great write, and a win in my best of 2019 contest!
La France Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 11:41 AM
CayCay, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write ~
Roper Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 4:44 PM
A beautiful romantic verse, CayCay, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 1:25 PM
Hello Cay-Cay, I find this poem to be romantic. Well done.Have a a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Cay-Cay how do I reach you? I could not find your name on Soup Mail? Please let me know. Thank you.
Breedt Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 7:12 AM
A poem with twist. Mmm spooning and swooning. Its a great poem and so romantic. Love . Me
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 5:24 PM
wow, Caycay, you created a beautiful tribute to true love with this gem. I especially loved the last two stanzas It just got better and better as I read it. the way you described his blue eyes and the monsters turning to swans . Hey, I miss you, sweetie. Tried calling a few times and sent you emails. I sure hope you are ok. Luv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 5:24 PM
and a fave!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 3:41 PM
'Regal swans grace my dream-phased sleep because you love-chased me.' I adore the way you ended this. I love the romance in this lovely poem CayCay. I wrote mine with the swans in love. This is a premier contest so I hold little hope of getting on her list, but I think yours will. Hugs and Easter blessings my friend. I called you this morn. xxoo
Neumann Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 5:10 AM
This is a wonderful image of swans and a positive swan song. I enjoyed that. Thank you for sharing. Kind wishes, Kai
Lindley Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 5:06 PM
The grace and beauty of swans is such a pleasing sight my friend. Your verses illustrate that light and beauty vanquishes the dark.. A fav.. a true gem..
Lamoureux Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Cool piece on the power of love to chase away our demons.
Daniel Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:05 AM
Very beautiful with internal rhyme, CayCay:)
Rose  Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 12:06 PM
Any time you dream of swans its bound to be a graceful peaceful dream Cay. Its beautifully rendered and ready for a win. Hope your day is great this Sunday Love xo ps thank you for catching my typo and for reading my poetry.
La France Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 10:00 AM
CayCay, this is quite wonderful, it reminded me a poem I wrote, that was more of a short story a long time ago about a magical swan who came to me in a dream, that poem along with many others got destroyed by accident and I have wished to re-create it, but it is hard to re-create a past poem, to find the mood again, at least it is for me ~
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April 14, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Lovely write my friend...you were always a beautiful swan CayCay...happy swan endings...^WW^...{*J*}
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April 13, 2019 at 6:03 PM
It's so nice to be around people who make us better. I find if I lay off the pistachio ice cream at bed time, I have less nightmares. Go figure. Have a great day.
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