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Suddenly Swans

SUDDENLY SWANS
Highland lake, congealed cobalt…placid rhythm of breeze on ripples corrugates the contours of shadows of the aligned towering trees looking up to the cerulean sky weaving transient tapestry afloat on clumps of cotton cloud… design enigmatic morphing in sudden surge of wind to a flying flotilla of patterned ivory alight on flapping wings of serenity with serenading avian grace on sapphire mirror of the lake the reflected cloud cluster turns suddenly swans.
April 10, 2019

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Date: 5/30/2019 10:25:00 PM
Wow! Your poem is expressed with such beautiful artistry, Subimal. I was swept up by the enchanting spirit of this piece; 'a flying flotilla of patterned ivory/alight on flapping wings of serenity/ with serenading avian grace'. Your final two lines make for a spectacular finale. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/28/2019 10:00:00 PM
I enjoyed this contest Subimal. Your poem is so lovely. I am happy to see it on the winners list. Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/28/2019 8:29:00 AM
Just beautiful Subimal, congratulations for your win, and thank you! xomo
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Date: 4/10/2019 10:48:00 PM
Very pretty, Enjoyed the read. BG
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/12/2019 1:04:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and for your nice comment. Much appreciated.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/12/2019 1:04:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and for your nice comment. Much appreciated.

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