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Sudden Summer Storm

Gentle mists from a smattering of clouds Struggling to make their way to the ground The sun is having its way far, far above Sending rays of shimmering searing down, Turning the droplets into a rising steam. Darker clouds gathering on the far horizon Chant unbridled threats at the summer sky Invite the weakling mists to make another try Challenging the partly cloudy summery day, But clearly western weather is coming our way. Quickly the thunderheads make their move Again empowering the tiny droplets of mist A gusty cool wind gushes in from the north, Chasing me inside with a sudden downpour. The power is flickering, the lights gone off Strong bursts of thunder are accompanied With frightening streaks of lightning bolts, And, just as quickly, the rain clouds move on To dump their anger on another destination. The lights come back on and the noises stop As the sun comes out, and the humidity drops.
Written June 2, 2022

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Date: 6/6/2022 12:06:00 AM
I feel like I am there, in the downpour - this is totally real.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/6/2022 8:07:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. Someone suggested I should have been a weather forecaster.
Date: 6/4/2022 2:51:00 PM
Excellent imagery, Milt. Great tale of a sudden summer storm. The way you developed to tale, reminded me of a horse racetrack announcer. The buildup kept me engaged all the way to the finish line. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Date: 6/4/2022 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Bill. Your comment was good to hear. I appreciated it.
Date: 6/4/2022 9:37:00 AM
Hi my friend, Climatic change has reached the door of humanity what a calamity. Striking and startling. Such a stupendous write Milton. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/4/2022 1:21:00 PM
Unfortunately, it has, Jennifer. I appreciate your reading and commenting on my poems. Thanks!
Date: 6/3/2022 12:29:00 PM
You make a fine poetic weather man Milton, every word describes the scene, to the T, lovely poem penned, hope all is well, not on site much these days, trying to catch up !
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/3/2022 1:59:00 PM
Well, thank you so much, Mystic Rose Rose. How thoughtful of you to come by. I have missed you. I appreciated your thoughtful comment.
Date: 6/3/2022 11:39:00 AM
i wouldnt need an image with this poem Milt, your imagery is so vivid xx
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/3/2022 1:59:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Just wrote it as I experienced it. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 6/2/2022 2:26:00 PM
A photograph of the weather, the nuances of a summer storm that can only be captured with the keen eye of a poet. Great text, my friend!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 4:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Marco. I sat on my porch as this sudden summer storm approached. It was, indeed, spectacular.
Date: 6/2/2022 2:21:00 PM
I never mind a summer storm Milton, it keeps the dust down and cools the air you captured the storm in all its glory well in your verse. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 4:55:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. Yes, indeed. Mother Nature has reason behind her actions.

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