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Words, Such a wonder, Words. Little drawings Such simple, small paintings Twenty-six simple forms, so scary, so all  Distinguishable stringable, sequentiable, magical. My own words float in the air,  I can see and hear them  they sing me a song, they call me, they whisper and menace, they form films and images without seeing them, the most  intriguing patterns weave. My poetry a loom. Words, Such a hurdle Words. My Fingers and My hands speak But they twist my tongue As long as I stay silent, they stay  pristine in their cellophane crispy state. So I better not speak or they will be spoiled. Instead I ask you to craft me a story, Use those letters to enthrall me. Make the words disappear. Make me see images, Magic and love. Words, Give me please, Words. *** Originally written for a friend October 18, 2016

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Date: 2/20/2017 10:48:00 PM
You work magic with words and from your heart they shine! <3
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Darren White
Date: 2/20/2017 11:40:00 PM
Thank you, my dear friend :)
Date: 2/20/2017 8:32:00 PM
glad you liked the song Mark did for my poem.
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Darren White
Date: 2/20/2017 11:40:00 PM
YOUR poem is wonderful! And I like EVERYTHING that Mark does, he made your poem into a beautiful song. And I am still so honoured that he did one of my lyrics for me, just like that :D
Date: 2/20/2017 8:31:00 PM
this is so nice, DArren. It's the kind of poem that WORD masters can really appreciate!! And YOU are a master of words!
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Darren White
Date: 2/20/2017 11:39:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, that is a compliment :)
Date: 2/20/2017 4:08:00 PM
This is so beautiful Darren. Every word has a purpose and the overall effect with the shape makes for a most, heartfelt, inspiring read:-) You and words equal magic :-) A definite fave. blessings, lynn
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Darren White
Date: 2/20/2017 11:39:00 PM
Lynn, Thank you, also for the fave! :)

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