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Success Or Failure's Failure - Guts and Gain

Success or Failure’s Failure Was it success or failure’s failure, The will to win or a refusal to lose. No guts, no glory!! – no pain, no gain!! He stayed the course – unnoticed, walked early through the cold mist, prayed to a heartless, distant god, answered the call every morning to rise, to stiffen his back, move forward toward another fading sunset. No crowds lined dawn’s damp streets, his only applause the sound of windblown debris clattering on concrete, no ribbons rewarded his perseverance, his laurel wreath a sweat-stained pillow, his trophy case a mantel of children’s pictures. It took guts to amass such gains the sweet touch of love’s regeneration the continuum of living family, the footsteps of a life – following a distant shadow at dawn. Is it success – or failure’s failure? John G. Lawless 7/5/2015

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Date: 8/20/2015 7:00:00 PM
what a sweet win... LINDA
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:07:00 PM
John, congrats on your wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 8/17/2015 8:48:00 AM
Wow an amazing write John! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/17/2015 8:03:00 AM
thought provoking write John many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 8/17/2015 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Jan
Date: 8/16/2015 9:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/17/2015 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Eve always nice to hear from you.
Date: 8/16/2015 8:03:00 PM
John, failure`s failure... =") nice thought provoking phrase you got there and well-described all through out the poem...insightful too! thank you for participating and CONGRATULATIONS!!.~Olive Eloisa
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John Lawless
Date: 8/17/2015 8:31:00 AM
my pleasure to play in the contest
Date: 7/6/2015 10:05:00 AM
Wow...I like this. Makes one really think... Does success always have to mean fame in one's own field? Can't one be considered successful if at the end of the day he has done his best sans the trappings? To take the question further...if one is not successful the way the world defines the word, would it mean he's a failure? Or as you said, the negative word cannot be ascribed to his dedicated but simple lifestyle, hence failure's failure... a thought provoking write...I like this, John.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/17/2015 8:30:00 AM
Kim, sorry to be so late in responding - life intervened, as it will. thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this poem. Your support and input are always appreciated.

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