Subtle Spring

Congratulations, Sara, on your win. A thouroughly enjoyable etheree so lyrical and clever. Howard

Wonderful write Sara, Congrats on your win

Spring is the gatekeeper - fun image Sara. Congratulations on your win! :)

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Spring Etheree  write/pretty picture. What a great last line/so true.... Spring will be here very soon.... Have a wonderful day/week writing away.........

Beautiful Spring Etheree. "Sunbeam shakes her yellow hair down". Lovely image. Congratulations Sara on your winning placement.

Sara, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful poem!

This poem, dear Sara, is truly profound and thought-provoking. It evokes deep emotions, possesses a captivating charm, and is elegantly crafted. Your interpretation of the chosen form is not only subtle but also exceptional. Outstanding job!

This is very lovely and a charming entry for the contest

Evocative, charming, elegant and indeed a very subtle interpretation of the chosen form. Excellent work Howard

- Yes, we have a lot of beauty waiting for us ... lovely poem, Sara :) - hugs

Are you practicing or is this your contest entry? Lovely etheree.. full of nice imagery..

This is lovely. Noticing your connection of red with natural transitions like spring and fall and dawn and dusk. And I can hear those subtle doves advocating well-fed peace with more feeding species. Consciousness, here, includes perception and also deeper iconic feelings of comfort and joy, power and light, universal salvation and unitarian redemption, sacred ecology and systematic mind/body theology.