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Substitute For Ice

I had realised that the size of the ice was nice, but the price didn't recognise my sacrifice. So,i had to compromise the ice for some rice; to minimise. But some spies came to join Me In my rice; promising to buy some ice after the rice. But In Their eyes; I saw lies. So i refused to harmonise, but dey criticised, and threatened to jeopardise, if i didn't give dem my rice. I also realised that dey had devised a wicked device to my demise But i was wise. So i specialised a plan and to their surprise; I took off with my rice for miles; to get somewhere nice, And enjoy my rice...

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Date: 12/1/2024 11:28:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/8/2016 12:06:00 PM
Awesome free verse
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Date: 1/10/2016 4:25:00 PM
great free verse. O S F C I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing
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