Sublime

"I have dipped my pen in the sublime, it is my gift to you . . ."
Each word a diamond shines
Each note a music that rhymes
"I have dipped my pen in the sublime, it is my gift to you . . ."
So precious, so tender, so pure
Filled with love so rare
"I have dipped my pen in the sublime, it is my gift to you . . ."
A bit of a rainbow, in a grey sky
A white dove that can’t fly
"I have dipped my pen in the sublime, it is my gift to you . . ."
A pink horizon, breaking dawn
A deer with a suckling fawn
"I have dipped my pen in the sublime, it is my gift to you . . ."
The hanging dew drenched berries
Snow covered red cherries
"I have dipped my pen in the sublime, it is my gift to you . . ."
Taste but with your heart open
And God willing you’ll touch the sun
For I have dipped my pen in the sublime, it is my gift to you . . .

By Tahera Mannan
28/06/2011
For Constance’s “ Writing in the Sublime” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/1/2012 12:46:00 AM
Wonderful and full of purity! :)
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Date: 7/3/2011 1:15:00 PM
I can't believe how many contest results I've missed - many congrats on all your recent wins, Tahera : )
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Date: 7/2/2011 12:26:00 PM
"Taste but with your heart open and God willing you'll touch the sun..." What an incredible line, Tahera. Such a beautiful poem. I'm still struggling with health issues and am sorry I have missed so much fine work. Your poem deserved a higher placement. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/1/2011 3:06:00 PM
Congratulations Tahera on you win in my contest with this amazing poem, you truly dipped your pen in the sublime~~
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Date: 7/1/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Writing in the Sublime" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:30:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Tahera
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Date: 7/1/2011 5:55:00 AM
Such a wonderful wrte.... and win... COngrats!!!!! always Michael
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Date: 7/1/2011 12:35:00 AM
tahera.. i love the repetition of phrases here... a defining piece, hon! :) sweet congrats on your amazing win! :) huggs
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Date: 6/30/2011 11:30:00 PM
tahera, how clever the way you repeated her quote and showed examples of things sublime. I don't know how you rated but from the looks of comments below you did very well. Congratulations to you. I am here with my left arm in a sling. haha. But I am doing ok and feeling hopeful for complete recovery from what caused me to have my surgery! I am getting off here now . Nightie night!
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Date: 6/30/2011 3:22:00 PM
Congrats Tahera dear friend on your exciting win in the contst with this extaordinary entry luv.. amazing as u are sweetie..luv..
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Date: 6/30/2011 2:59:00 PM
Beautiful, Tahera. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 6/29/2011 9:34:00 AM
That's cool how you used the given quote as refrain, Tahera :) I really like what you say here, and you have many wonderful lines :) Wish you the best in the contest and I hope that all is well with you :D
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Date: 6/28/2011 9:57:00 AM
Truely a sublime write Tahera....enjoyed.Best wishes.
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Tahera. Hoping you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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