Sublime

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I recall how it felt the first time I set eyes upon your smiling face. My anxieties started to climb, and my pounding pulse began to race; yet, incredibly, it felt sublime! (Rhyme) 05/17/2023 Bitsize Contest no 64 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/18/2023 3:58:00 PM

Hello Emile, there is a lot of feelings in this poem. Lots of emotions. My friend enjoy your evening. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/19/2023 11:37:00 AM

Hello Emile, You are welcome. my friend. enjoy your day. our Friend, \Darlene/

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/19/2023 8:26:00 AM

Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.