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Subject On Love's Truce

When fiery language rages our worlds collide, That even new moonlight pales as night-stars hide Into shadows of inked duskfall through night and bleak rain-- Where pin- pointed gazes flare an out-pour again: I hurl a tempest , wild my yells You, a cracked windstorm-- Till holy silence overcomes us turning gust to milder form Precious reveries slowly abide clear as lustrous dew; Unforgotten in time's intervals scenting passion anew . Oh dream-makers clutch unto love Tender the wave of sky… When velvet kisses rush and meet drenched in rain’s lullaby. ``````````` 4/3/2017 On Any Subject: Brenda Chiri's Contestt

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Date: 4/10/2017 10:23:00 PM
Exquisite nette:) Double the congratulations! The weaving of two poems is amazing craftsmanship, the passion and quarrel so beautifully expressed . It's such a pleasure to read your lovely words. You really outdid yourself with this beauty. lynnxxx
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Date: 4/5/2017 11:58:00 PM
I love how love saved the day! well done super 7
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Date: 4/4/2017 11:17:00 AM
Downright magnificent especially the poem with a poem approach. 7+ for creativity!
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Date: 4/3/2017 4:17:00 AM
- Wow, Nette - This is like in the store .... Buy two .... get one free! :) - Awesome poem (s) - Luck in the contest - Happy new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/2/2017 7:31:00 PM
I know when I see a winner and this is truly one. It is beautiful and very well written. GL in the contest.
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Date: 4/2/2017 6:00:00 PM
I read this as two separate poems and then read this together and I am so impressed with this beautiful work of art Nette! It never falters and blends in such a beautiful way that is seamless. I am sure this will be a top winner! 7 ; )
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Date: 4/2/2017 4:55:00 PM
Hell hath no fury as a woman scorned! Sheeesh glad there was a happy ending here!!!! :)
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Date: 4/2/2017 3:05:00 PM
The sentiment of making up and remembering that committed love is for keeps is exceptionally marked through your metaphors. Up on the shelves!
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