Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Subject On Love's Truce

When fiery language rages
                                                     our worlds collide,

That even new moonlight pales 
                                                     as night-stars hide

Into shadows of inked duskfall
                                                     through night and bleak rain--


Where pin- pointed gazes flare
                                                      an out-pour  again:

I hurl a tempest , wild my yells  
                                                      You, a cracked  windstorm--

Till  holy silence overcomes  us        
                                                      turning gust  to milder form

Precious reveries slowly abide
                                                      clear as lustrous dew;

Unforgotten in  time's intervals
                                                       scenting passion anew .

Oh dream-makers clutch unto  love 
                                                       Tender  the  wave of sky…

When velvet kisses rush and  meet
                                                       drenched in rain’s lullaby.



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4/3/2017
On Any Subject: Brenda Chiri's Contestt

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Lynn Marie April 10, 2017 at 10:23 PM Exquisite nette:) Double the congratulations! The weaving of two poems is amazing craftsmanship, the passion and quarrel so beautifully expressed . It's such a pleasure to read your lovely words. You really outdid yourself with this beauty. lynnxxx

Just James April 5, 2017 at 11:58 PM I love how love saved the day! well done super 7

Manny Paras April 4, 2017 at 11:17 AM Downright magnificent especially the poem with a poem approach. 7+ for creativity!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2017 at 4:17 AM - Wow, Nette - This is like in the store .... Buy two .... get one free! :) - Awesome poem (s) - Luck in the contest - Happy new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janis Medders Tobechi April 2, 2017 at 7:31 PM I know when I see a winner and this is truly one. It is beautiful and very well written. GL in the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong April 2, 2017 at 6:00 PM I read this as two separate poems and then read this together and I am so impressed with this beautiful work of art Nette! It never falters and blends in such a beautiful way that is seamless. I am sure this will be a top winner! 7 ; )

Arthur Vaso April 2, 2017 at 4:55 PM Hell hath no fury as a woman scorned! Sheeesh glad there was a happy ending here!!!! :)

Jajosh Ongado April 2, 2017 at 3:05 PM The sentiment of making up and remembering that committed love is for keeps is exceptionally marked through your metaphors. Up on the shelves!