Stupor Snore

Saint Patrick slept in stupor self-imposed
in the back of the pub with the door closed
	they sang out for him
	to silence the din
but he snuggly snored on indisposed
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Neumann Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 3:43 AM
Very funny. A true Irish Saint ...
Fowler Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 5:53 AM
Ha - thanks Kai. :) Linda
Sambourne Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 7:13 AM
Another fine, funny limerick. Superb alliteration, too. Certainly a winner. Sincerest regards, Brian
Fowler Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 8:37 AM
You're too kind :) Thanks for the visit and comments! Linda
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Like this, Linda! Perfect Limerick! Love ~ Mala
Fowler Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 10:25 AM
Thank you Mala. :) Linda
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 8:11 PM
Good one, Linda! Janice
Fowler Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 5:24 AM
Thanks Janice :) Linda
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 11:54 AM
Poor St. Patrick one of those who draws in the walls when sleeping. He need a sleep apnea test and maybe a C-pap. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Fowler Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 1:28 PM
Hi Sara. And thank you for the visit and comments. It's always appreciated. :) Linda
Cunningham Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 2:54 AM
Lol, I think people were buying him drinks and he fell off his saintly perch. Good luck in the contest Linda. Tom
Fowler Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 5:37 AM
Thank you Tom. I appreciate your supportive comments. :) Linda
Buhagiar Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 11:00 PM
Agree with Linda. Must have been in his early days.
Fowler Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 6:08 AM
Hi Victor. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. :) Have a great week. Linda
Fowler Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 5:27 AM
Hi Victor. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. :) Have a great week. Linda
Wolf Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Not being Irish Catholic, I don't know the answer to this question: What kind of a saint is disposed to drink and snore on St. Patrick's day?! lol. Bottoms up, gw
Fowler Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Ha! Well, he was not always a saint, and as I understand his history, not from a particularly religious family. And who knows what occurred during his time with the pirates after being kidnapped. :)) LOL Thanks for commenting gw, Linda
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