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Stumps (And Trees) I Have Loved

It's the place where we sit And play a game of cards. The biggest stump ever, In any of our yards. Once it was a chestnut tree With branches ever so high. They reached across the yard And way up to the sky. It was where a tiny crow lived, "Elvis", the children named him. He fell out of the tree as a babe But was safely put back on his limb. City officials hated the tree. Their wires ran through it's branches And with their power and telephone They wanted to take no chances. So the tree came down one day And was chopped for firewood. It heated the house the whole winter Just like a good tree should. All that's left is the stump now, It's about four feet across, So we can sit here and play cards But it's still our yards biggest loss. for Matt Caliri's "I fell in Love With a Tree Stump Contest"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/18/2010 10:34:00 AM
Don't you just hate it when government officials show no respect for trees or the environment in general. From the wayyou described this tree, it was indeed a big loss for your family when they chopped it down. Very nicely written, Francine! You have to be very creative to even approach this contest theme. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/15/2010 10:36:00 AM
a wonderful image of love, Francine you offer the right kind of beauty to the light of nature. Like this entry, good luck in the contest' luv n.d.
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Date: 10/15/2010 10:01:00 AM
LOVELY, FRANCINE! LOVED YOUR POEM~SKAT
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Date: 10/15/2010 7:57:00 AM
This is a GREAT way to express the theme, Francine. I hope it does well in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/14/2010 11:44:00 AM
Francine, brilliant imagery in this piece of your beloved stump. All the best for the contest ;) Wilma
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Date: 10/14/2010 11:20:00 AM
Nicely penned Francine. I'd put my rump on your stump and play a card game with trumps. Joe
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Date: 10/14/2010 11:13:00 AM
good entry Francine! Take care~Deb
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