Stuck in the Middle with You

When you are alone,
you look at the others
and think
that one had too much ...

time to think

and that one … 
well, you surmise, 
they are on the brink 
of some precipitous ...

evaluation,
about to take a big tumble, 
they parade monumentally,
then they fall like the risen 

bright and shiny
drunk on words
a new wonderful 
holy smoke rolling 

addiction 

the signs are in the strokes
of keys hit, but not placed,
into slots that fit, or do not, 
you watch their thoughts 

and listen 
to yours, marked 
in valuable time 
drugged by words

beating the drum
like its dinner served, 
in metronome 
tick tock tick tock

they release the signs 
big notes all 
in black strokes
seconds before midnight

poets and their poetry
too much time to think
they evaluate the roads
watching the others, walking

straight lines, 
some off the charts
like rogue bees
gone all curves

they do the two-step
like some ball room 
polished Pride of Erin,
thinking simultaneously,

I'm caught up, dancing,
then, perplexed 
brow wrinkling 
questioning, 

where's the limerick dance card...
to get off

then you swipe left 
and realise, there's 
no margin right?
beam me up Scotty

with the lost others,
speaking of love, 
oozing over ripe scribbles 
like honey dripping 

off lips licked unseen

replacing misfortune
with sensual limericks
the romance tasted 
for a small corner of heaven

the pearly gates 
well and truly wide open

oh, sunny fortune 
in fields of roses 
they plough 
their way through 

the fragrant feels
scents of violets 
and forget-me-nots
fecund little deaths unheard

yet somehow believed

poets and their poetry
ever thoughtful, 
chirping incessantly, 
kept like beautiful birds 

swinging exotically
in their safe gilded cages
minds advertising 
in unsolid sold unity

the need to be felt 
for what it is worth,
yet true hearts
paraded unseen

in the last days 
of their old worlds
they parlay
in a strange language

lost in the ordinary
they are haughty
owls parliamentary 
gloved and ever ready

kings and queens




Candide Diderot. ‘24 





stuck in the middle with you…
“clowns to the left of me, jokers to the right”


the word. beetles, black. 





“...their thoughts 
pirouetting words hung, 
the black beetles 
shine 
like exotic 
fresh water 
pearls strung...”

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Date: 3/8/2024 6:30:00 AM
Good Morning, Candide, This is quite a mesmerizing exploration of the intricacies of human thought and perception. I felt your words dance with imagery and introspection, inviting me, the reader, to contemplate the complexities of existence. How you intertwine observations of others with reflections on oneself creates a thought-provoking narrative that lingers in the mind long after reading. A very captivating piece. I loved this song in High School. - Warmest Regards, Daniel
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Date: 3/8/2024 6:39:00 AM
hmmm, I had a moment. Your review is entertaining. Thank you. Smile. x 1. Currently on the playlist, Paint it Black/Stones.
Date: 3/8/2024 6:04:00 AM
Stuck in the Middle with You...
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Date: 3/8/2024 6:05:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ln7Vn_WKkWU
Date: 3/8/2024 6:04:00 AM
The Word ...
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Date: 3/8/2024 6:06:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RfBEqiEhCgM
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