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Stuck In the Can-For Contest

There once was a fellow named Stan
Who got his butt stuck in the can
He screamed and he hollered
No one would be bothered
Til saved by his twin sister Jan





04/26/2015

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Casarah Nance

Date: 4/30/2015 5:49:00 PM

Haha funny with a personal touch. :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/30/2015 11:10:00 AM

Congrats on your win Tim!

Nandita Das

Date: 4/30/2015 12:08:00 AM

This was so funny. Congratulations on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2015 11:36:00 PM

I really liked this one, tim. Congrats on the winners' list.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/29/2015 7:59:00 PM

Hahaha.... Funny, Tim! Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7:~)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2015 4:59:00 PM

Hi Tim, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick Win.... LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 4/29/2015 4:16:00 PM

Oh Tim I should have guessed it was you who came out with a Stan reference lol - congrats on your 3rd place in my first contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/29/2015 5:40:00 PM

ha ha ha I must be getting predictable! Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 4/29/2015 4:21:00 PM

Thanks Jan...It was either Stan or grey hair lol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/27/2015 12:56:00 PM

:D How lucky Stan had a sister to rescue him! LMAO There are times when "stuck in the can" means something else during times of illness. This was unexpected and very witty! Jan will love it! Love, Carolyn

Joseph May

Date: 4/27/2015 9:59:00 AM

haha...good one...