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Harlow's Pit The pit succeeded. Harlow's toy infected all with doubt. Alone, the young macaques despaired in bins with no way out. The pit was steel, with sloping walls some food, a grate, and spout. No mother's love while growing up just fear with no way out. The pit was made to last. For years the world began to shout, but Harlow grinned and left them there in pain with no way out. The pit was Harlow's own design, a sadist wit quite stout. He felt the cancer eat his wife and love with no way out. September 1, 2017. (based on accounts of Dr. Harry Harlow's experiment 'put of despair' to inflict despression on infant macaque monkeys by keeping them for years in isolation chambers). Written for Sara Kendrick's contest "Stuck."

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Date: 9/28/2017 1:36:00 PM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..Sad that someone would do that to an animal/human..Interesting work..Sara
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/28/2017 2:51:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. This kind of animal research, as well as solitary confinement as punishment, is something I oppose. I didn't have a very good personal stuck story, so thought I'd do something slightly political. Looking forward to next contest!
Date: 9/28/2017 7:31:00 AM
Well written Jack. I feel for the pour creatures.
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/28/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you, James!
Date: 9/27/2017 5:05:00 PM
Jack, outstanding write, congratulations on your win in the contest !
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/28/2017 11:29:00 AM
Thank you, Broken Wings!

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