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A tall fellow strolled on a beach abroad

Along a cream-like sandy shore unflawed,

He tripped on a small shell

And fell with a sharp yell,

Lying on the ground while all his teeth gnawed.

 

Strolling on the Beach



A tall fellow strolled on a beach abroad
Along a cream-like sandy shore unflawed,
He tripped on a small shell
And fell with a sharp yell,
Lying on the ground while all his teeth gnawed.
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George Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 9:15 AM
This is so funny. Congratulations on your win dear Krish...! Even a small shell can cause a fall 😊
Guptar Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 11:50 PM
Thank you Valsa for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. Sending you blessings of light, You may wish to see my latest blog.
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 10:01 PM
Congrats on your win, Krish 😄
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September 22, 2026 at 11:59 PM
Thank you dear poetess for your kind wishes. You have been so supportive and sympathetic towards my verses during my relatively short journey on Poetry Soup. I have leant a lot from your numerous gems. Wish you the blessings of light
Kitchin Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 1:29 PM
Krish, a fun one, congratulations on your winning placement. 🥉
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September 23, 2026 at 12:10 AM
Thank you a lot dear poet for appreciating the above Limerick and for its placement in the contest sponsored by you. Wish you a pleasant day. You may wish to have a glace at my recent blog.
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