Stroking Dreams of Fire

as your fingers 
brush my skin
petals of memory


are pushed apart,
I am left a sigh 
drenched in want 


I cross my legs
not knowing, 
their angles would 
draw your attention
your eyes lined 
the curve of degree,
I almost knew 
when your mouth 
smiled hello,


the pull of your tongue
wrapped my need
In smoked pearls,
and legs of oak 
turned to butter,
spent they melted
to knell supplication 


your eyes begged sleep
but a desire still whispered
with a listing tongue of fire 


I stroked the line
between dreams and 
your sleeping face,
I stirred the coals
in your Dreamtime 
to ignite 


as my fingers brush
you ablaze,
my lips rub 
the velvet embers 


I smile as you arise
and then I fire,
at your first touch


I am floating as ash 
in our wake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/22/2010 10:04:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Jayne. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:36:00 AM
Oh to find a fire like this and feed it with Scottish oxygen. Sensually sensuous Jayne >> James
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:47:00 AM
this sounds all so sensual lol,,enjoyed
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:26:00 AM
Very passionate write...Sounds like first love...Or love at first sight...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for the generous comments on my work...I truly appreciate your time being spent reading my work..Sara
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