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she reveals

   her glowing beauty

       petal by petal

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     Contest: Sexyku
Sponsor: R. Lamoureux

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/2/2021 7:14:00 AM

awesome haiku here, Paul - don't think I ever read this one, so very glad I saw it today

Paul Callus
Date: 1/6/2021 2:33:00 PM

Thank you, Jack. All the best // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/21/2017 4:24:00 PM

Just scintillating, Paul. The seductive title caught my eye but the seductive beauty of your haiku caught my heart, and so temptingly and teasingly, my imagination as well.. So many layers of enticement my talented friend... Your poetry is a sparkling and joyful experience always..!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/22/2017 5:04:00 PM

I love your lovely comments, Susan, but above all I am touched by "The seductive title caught my eye but the seductive beauty of your haiku caught my heart". Thank you for all the awesome comments that you write. ~ Warm regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 7/8/2017 3:30:00 AM

I wasn't a member at the time you wrote this Paul - but it's such an evocative, sensual and sweet Haiku ...Maria

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2017 10:30:00 AM

Thank you, Maria. Evocative and sensual is something which you shine at, too! Regards // paul

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/11/2017 1:50:00 PM

A flower's essence is your language Paul:) A stunning haiku and congratulations on the well deserved honour.fave lynnxxx I laugh often when I recall a comment of yours about my 'pole-dancing mother' in a poem. It is a wonderful, real comment I will remember fondly for life and has me smiling when I need it the most. Your poem title made me think of it again...thank you:)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/14/2017 2:07:00 PM

This comment had just about missed my attention, Lynn, good thing I delved right back in my Inbox:) Thank you for such a pleasant visit and top rating. I remember that poem well, Lynn; I think I'll go back to read it again:) Best regards // paul

John Michaels

Date: 4/8/2017 4:57:00 AM

What a great Haiku - love the imagery and the double meanings. Congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/8/2017 7:47:00 AM

Thank you for your feedback, John. have a nice day. Regards // paul

David Pekrul

Date: 3/11/2017 3:36:00 PM

This paints quite a picture in just a few words.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2017 3:55:00 PM

Thank you, David; you're always welcome to stop by. Regards // paul

Deborah Burch

Date: 2/28/2017 9:53:00 AM

Back to say: Congratulations! Paul. Loved this one so much ;) big Hugggs deb

Paul Callus
Date: 2/28/2017 12:46:00 PM

Thank you, Deb; double visits are always appreciated:) Hugs // paul

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/25/2017 6:57:00 AM

this is one of my faves on the list, clever yet beautiful in its simplicity - congrats on your contest win!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/25/2017 7:39:00 AM

Thank you, Charlotte....I found your entry to be amongst the very best; for sure I would have placed it among the first three! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2017 11:24:00 PM

Back to congratulate you Hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 2/24/2017 1:37:00 PM

Thank you for this return visit and the congrats, Eve! Hugs // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/23/2017 9:55:00 PM

Hi Paul, I'm happy to see you made the winning list with this "sensual"write. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 2/24/2017 2:07:00 PM

Many thanks, Alexis. May I wish you a very lovely weekend. Regards // paul

Doug Vinson

Date: 2/23/2017 9:16:00 PM

Perfection. Paul, you rule with one-word titles. : )

Paul Callus
Date: 2/24/2017 2:09:00 PM

You encourage no end, Doug:) Thank you! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2017 5:53:00 PM

I sure remember this one and I am here to congratulate you on a well deserved win, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/24/2017 1:48:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Applause goes to you on garnering the very top place:) Regards // paul

John Lawless

Date: 2/23/2017 5:38:00 PM

...she loves me.....she loves me.....Congrats Paul on your placement.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/24/2017 1:47:00 PM

Thank you, John. Once again congrats on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 2/23/2017 11:27:00 AM

Love the title Paul...Congrats on your win

Paul Callus
Date: 2/24/2017 1:46:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. I found waves of ecstasy to be a very worthy winner, too! // paul

John Hamilton

Date: 2/23/2017 10:50:00 AM

Great haiku Paul! Nothing like natures beauty being revealed, congrats to you too on a fine win!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/24/2017 1:42:00 PM

Thank you, John. I enjoyed your Spanish Eyes, too! Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/23/2017 8:59:00 AM

Congratulations Paul, thank you for inspiring this contest. It was a tough one to judge. You are in very talented company.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/23/2017 10:14:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. I have seen the winning entries...your contest has inspired some really good poems. Regards // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/21/2017 1:42:00 AM

Back for another read (my favorite of the 'sexykus' I've read)...:))

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 11:04:00 AM

Thank you, Rhonda :) :) Regards ~ paul

Judy Ball

Date: 2/19/2017 10:09:00 PM

Love this Paul. The pic is perfect for it too. Roses are my favorite flower. Bravo. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2017 4:20:00 PM

Thank you, Judy. Your lovely comments are truly appreciated. Blessings to you, too. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2017 7:05:00 PM

ooh la la!! I LIKES it.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2017 4:18:00 PM

I just love it when you comment like that, Andrea :) Thank you! Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/19/2017 12:43:00 PM

Now that's a sexyku!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2017 4:16:00 PM

Oh dear...I've just entered this in the Sexyku contest!! Thanks for reading and liking, Richard! Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/17/2017 3:31:00 PM

Provocative, Paul! You have a talent for the haiku form. Hope you had a nice birthday and are doing well now. Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 2/18/2017 6:51:00 AM

That's a lovely compliment, coming from you, Carolyn...thank you! I got lots of pampering for my birthday; that's the positive side of not being well:) Hugs ~ paul