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no strings that held you to me nothing that tied you here just the pounding of my heart resonating in my ears the circle that forms around you I've now stepped away from moving left of your center out of your peripheral zone that blood red line you drew traced from a heart that seeped a fortress to be rebuilt as love makes it's retreat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/24/2009 7:46:00 AM
So beautifully written in perfect rhyming quatrains, but the message is sad "as love makes its retreat." You have a gift for this style of verse, JB. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 7:44:00 AM
Terrific poem my friend ! Love moves in many directions friend,...make good use of them all ! Awesome write ! james
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