Strings

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The quiver of ALL ... open, closed, one dimensional, vibrating, Larger scales appear as the particle norm, (antiphon?) ... Charge, mass, gravitons affect quantum states of matter, Super-symmetry between bosons, fermions, (a weighty throb) - Quantum fields connected ... influenced ... shaken, but still ... Not clearly defined in all events - not channeled to unification ... But it MUST, somehow ... it's there ... trembling, (like a horror), One of the weakest forces in all of the physical universe, yet ... Far beyond grasp, our claws raking deep the flesh of wonder - One day we'll laugh at its simplicity, that day ... God. Will. Weep. ~ 8th Place ~ in the "Miniverse" Poetry Contest, Nina Parmenter, Judge & Sponsor.

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/21/2019 12:01:00 PM

Undeniably a "Thinker's" poem. It took me few reads, but I finally felt smarter ;), Congrats on your win Greg! xomo <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 7:21:00 PM

LOL - thank you so much, Maureen ... these little questions to the ether are always fun! The things that keep my mind spinning late at night, and keep me from the healing of sleep. There MUST be a purpose, right? Blessings, Friend! :o) <3