String Quartet

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homemade scarlet string light Aroma mottling Degree burning autumn Leaves – with nymph flapping wings you win waltz to the rhythms on the zephyr's caroling strain rainbow-colored smooth waves gently rustling intonation oriflame Lasting autumn Carnelian philharmonic Orchestra Written: July 29, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/30/2022 7:27:00 AM

Such beautiful imagery of the flow of sounds from the strings. Well orchestrated poem, Lasaad. A nice rhytmic flow as I read the words. May your weekend bring comfort and more of these beautiful poetic thoughts my dear friend. Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/30/2022 5:53:00 AM

Lovely vocabulary my friend: waltz to the rhythms on the zephyr's caroling strain...

Michael Tor

Date: 7/30/2022 12:46:00 AM

What wonderful imagery your words convey Lasaad. Beautifully written my friend. Glad I read this Poetry this morning... Enjoy your weekend.

Valsa George

Date: 7/29/2022 9:20:00 PM

"Autumn leaves with nymph flapping wings" "waltz to the rhythms on the zephyr's caroling strain'..... Wow, a series of arresting images in this beautiful poem ! I am carried away by the beauty of these autumn leaves falling ! Fantastic dear Lasaad !