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What if I told you that time isn't the same? Weak and hurting more than you realize. Heading lateral, nearing sleep with maim. What if I told you that time isn't the same? Quiet and awake, eerie, lacking clear fame. The care I feel for you ever implies. What if I told you that time isn't the same? Weak and hurting more than you realize.
Written: February 23, 2023

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Date: 2/24/2023 6:12:00 AM
Something to reflect on--life changes and so do the emotions.
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Date: 2/24/2023 12:52:00 AM
Great argument. Time is never the same.
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Date: 2/23/2023 7:37:00 PM
Great poem my friend, very nicely put together
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Date: 2/23/2023 5:28:00 PM
Very thought provoking poem. Lovely.
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