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Stress

maybe it's true what they say stress can kill but maybe it's not always true how why don't we talk about the slow process of deterioration of metal in the elements rusting into brittleness the way stress is water and the mind is titanium, strong at first until water pours over and rust builds until it slowly comes apart unable to withstand the weight it once could

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Date: 2/17/2020 9:25:00 AM
The absence of stress is death. The steady increase of stress eventually leads to the absence of stress. It is best to maintain a reasonable balance.
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Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 2/17/2020 2:41:00 PM
I agree, thank you for reading! :D
Date: 11/18/2019 6:49:00 PM
Take a deep breath my dear friend, from your picture your too young to have stress. Be empty of worrying. Think of who created the thought.
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Date: 11/18/2019 6:34:00 PM
Stress can do much harm, I meditate and it helps, to alleviate the anxiety. Well done.
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Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 11/18/2019 9:39:00 PM
Thank you Pixie :)
Date: 11/17/2019 11:42:00 AM
Stress is unhealthy for sure...I find physical activity helps its release...great metaphor
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Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 11/17/2019 1:16:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem :) !
Date: 11/17/2019 6:47:00 AM
we al feel stress... hope you find a way to escape it...
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Brooklyn Cruz
Date: 11/17/2019 11:17:00 AM
Thank you, so do I haha

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