Strength

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Strength Crows caw an anxious call, roosters crow up a hidden sun Dried leaves rustle in the soft breeze Rain eludes the music's fun Low dark clouds speed on by, heading to the east and north A few rain drops drip from the roof Maybe soon will pour forth In the distance, sounds of a calf Uncommon these modern days But the sound of roosters across the creek, normal display Out on the porch in the damp fog A few minutes alone God visits in the quiet hour He gives strength for each groan

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Arturo Michael

Date: 10/11/2017 6:56:00 AM

Good morning Sara... I wonder what do you see and hear..."Crows caw an anxious call, roosters crow up a hidden sun" How do you see them? What do you hear from them... Have a lovely day

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/9/2017 4:05:00 AM

I hope this scene of serenity, through peaceful rain and tranquil fog, will bring to you a lot of happiness and love throughout your day! I really love reading the way your poem flowed, it rhymed rather spectacularly without any forced rhyming! You have written a magnificent piece this morning! What an awesome poem, Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/8/2017 7:10:00 PM

Happy scenery resides all around you--with visits from God--such a blessing it is!

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/8/2017 5:51:00 PM

Very nice Sara. I enjoyed this :)