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Streets of Solitude

" Misunderstood by my own metaphors, traversing the ivory webs of your cunning twilight ~ which tried to mute those feminine laments within me, I've metamorphosed to a colourless caterpillar, yearning to become an inferno of transformation, where the chakras of spirituality can silently etch my scars with the meditative muse of melancholic mimosas..." Akin a wounded tigress, I have wandered in your jungle of witchcraft, whimpering in lionhearted roars of a wildflower, whose phoenix potions can never be chased by time... for, even though my intuition is lost somewhere in the fields of lonely iris ~ I'll soon meander those vulnerable valleys that sheltered my wishes, from rolling off into the unseen... Waltzing down this labyrinth of lachrymose feelings ~ and walking in glass heels past this gallery of memories, I see those faces smiling upon me like fireflies from those mystical murals, as, the drizzles of my mascara once washed away their misery ~ shielding every star from blinking in its own blinding fate. Perhaps, there's a cosmic carpet knitted with a mist of magnolias ~ which will teleport me to those bohemian meadows longing to be cleansed, by the nectar of orchid-pink purity... and I'll be a buttercup bird with a peacock crown ~ free in all five senses, pirouetting upon pathways, streaked through the turquoise sands of opalescent ocean... Strolling across these stygian lily streets, betrayed by the sun ~ where every inch is a piercing reminiscence rushing through the raspberry veins of my imperfect innocence, I imagine an adventure to those mountains galore, draped in grape-green floral silk, fluttering in flamboyant fragrances ~ and purified by the citrine shimmers of falling sunsets... Bowing to the goddess of fairytales, I gaze beyond those gossamer horizons ~ for, I will no longer be a pianist playing musical riddles with porcelain fingertips, bereft of magic ~ this vessel of kohl and ferns shall forever keep floating upon a garland of gemstones ~ worn by the galaxy of jasmines. "...either soul should never be lost in the ekphrasis of evils ~ rather, a saga of solitude shall be sewn in the saplings whose seeds have been filtered with lotus fountains, and sown across these splitting stear-ways ~ which will finally lead me to those glistening gates, hiding the golden gardens of my heart-shaped haven... "

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Date: 12/17/2024 9:16:00 AM
Dear hiya, as always your metaphors left me in awe , feeling every word and metaphor youv woven here in such eloquence. You always speak in metaphors that i can totally comprehend, and in such a seamless manner too ,i especially loved the lines “ I will no longer be a pianist playing musical riddles with porcelain fingertips, bereft of magic ~ this vessel of kohl and ferns shall forever keep floating” despite all and everything youv seen and felt the power of strength and your voice emanates poetically so much strength! I absolutely love this! From alliterations to symbolism and also your creative diction! Left me speechless! What an impeccable take! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 12/12/2024 6:51:00 AM
Keeping goals in sight often helps through depressing times. Thank you for your hopeful philosophy. I related to your poem.
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Date: 12/12/2024 2:20:00 AM
You have captured deep emotions with the meditative muse of melancholic mimosas, and your poetry reflects such deep and ecstatic expressions. Brilliant.
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Date: 12/11/2024 4:14:00 AM
From where comes down such magical streams of poetry I wonder! Both Empress and you are made of the same stuff breathing out flames of metaphors as the mythical dragon. "I've metamorphosed to a colourless caterpillar, yearning to become an inferno of transformation, where the chakras of spirituality can silently etch my scars with the meditative muse of melancholic mimosas..." Too powerful that it is hard to imagine that these lines are from a young student who is still an apprentice in the art of poetry. So, by the time you become a veteran, where you will be able to fit in. You need a larger niche to be placed! Hats off dear Hiya before your brilliance.
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Date: 12/10/2024 5:12:00 PM
subtly intense, you create a mood of longing which allows the reader to explore his inner feelings with a sense of power . ..you amaze, hiya!
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Date: 12/10/2024 8:25:00 AM
Your one of the very best writers here dear Hiya, and I don't state that lightly. Your expressions are warm deep and altruistic, your soul must be glowing right now, love
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