Streets of Solitude

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Ink's Forgiveness or Solitude Contest  12/8/24

I would have sought some beautiful retreat,
Remote from cities and the din of men, ~
Some tranquil shore where lake and forest meet
By limpid stream or flower-lit, sylvan glen,
And would have reared, where non could e'er intrude,
A shrine to thee, O precious Solitude.
                                                                ~ John L. Stoddard

Like poet, Stoddard, I've found beautiful places to retreat.
My safe havens are streets of solitude where I walk alone.
They are not paved of gold for it's not their wealth I seek,
nor do I feel cold when I step upon them in my bare feet.
My road is not laid with yellow bricks lined with poppies
It's not a wily wizard's help I implore from a city of green.
My streets are serene, and in solitude I find peace of mind.
I never have need to turn a blind eye to atrocities I've seen.

No sticks and stones are thrown at me when I wander there
Never do I feel the need to hurry along the paths with care
Sometimes I wind my way down a country lane 
where I can act totally insane without fear of retribution, 
or the need to find a solution for worries that weigh me down. 
In my personal places, I don't wear a furrowed brow or a frown,

One of the roads I often traveled is made of sand, 
where waves agree with my thoughts, and not with a reprimand.  
There are no rules at the ocean's side, no ebb and flow of a tide 
for only in myself do I confidently confide my sacred secrets.

No false facades face these streets to swirl and curl my toes.
No lies or alibis ever find a niche in corners or shadows,
for all that matters is that I believe my streets of solitude 
have the amplitude to make me well, 
as if releasing me from the depths of hell.  
I dwell on such a street in my time of need.
It happens when the outside world is focused on warring and greed.  
I erect barriers and blockades in my mind. No one can find me when 
my street is strong fortress strong, and no wrong invades my life.
In silence I refuse to hear the bitterness of mankind,
or the foolish words they speak, for they've been expelled.

I rediscovered myself, time and again when I cross the threshold 
to the corner of Alone and Contented. 
I've not rented a room on any of my streets for a shelter is never needed.  
I've heeded the call of a babbling brook to sit a spell and simply 
read a book or close my eyes never fearing reprise or wear a disguise 
in self-defense.

I can be idle or imagine I'm at a music recital, my fingers on piano keys. Please don't assume it's laziness I feel or that I'm antisocial, though sometimes being around others holds no appeal.  
It's my choice and I'm not being rude when I take a walk on my own.
There is solace to be found in solitude.  
The streets give me freedom to choose my own way...
           but never to lose it or myself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 12/17/2024 8:48:00 AM
Dear Lin, I really loved this poem , it really connected with me on a deep level. And as i read i couldnt help but agree with all that youv expressed here in such a seamless manner! Sometimes solitude is everything and some of us are ok being there instead of walking through streets of deceit: “ sometimes being around others holds no appeal. It's my choice and I'm not being rude when I take a walk on my own.” this ending is what i would like to say too, infact every word in this! Hits home. Congratulations on your well deserved win! Thank you for sharing
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/18/2024 5:21:00 AM
We seem to share the same emotions for many things, Ink. I'm very grateful for your insightfulness into my writings and for giving this one a place on your winning list. I'm glad you relate.
Date: 12/11/2024 7:39:00 PM
You took me on a nice poetic journey. Peaceful.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/12/2024 1:44:00 AM
Thanks for coming along, Mike.
Date: 12/11/2024 11:37:00 AM
Lin, you describe your travel and state of mind in a very interesting way. There's a good lesson here for everyone. We don't need to be staring at a phone or have constant company. (At least not all the time) We can give our minds some freedom to lounge and go to a good place where we can daydream. It's often a very productive activity and reveals how really smart you are! Smiles from a fellow daydreamer!
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Date: 12/12/2024 1:44:00 AM
I really do enjoy my alone time, Duke. I get lost in whatever it is I choose to do without interruptions, or if I want to do nothing at all. Do I sound like I could be a cat? lol
Date: 12/9/2024 10:56:00 AM
Nice poem, Lin. You are always wonderful.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/12/2024 1:42:00 AM
Thank you, Jay.
Date: 12/8/2024 9:43:00 PM
Nothing beats time alone, you decide what to do and which path to tred, answerable to no one. Good luck Lin. Tom
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Date: 12/8/2024 11:59:00 PM
I enjoy my alone time. Some people don’t understand that. Thanks, Tom.
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