Streams In the Desert

This misty river, scented sweet From bare land you enthrall, To quench the evening's sultry heat Beside your cooling wall. Low tide lends splendor to this rite To twirl upon the dew Then lacquers every ledge with white; And powdered shades of blue. Tanned cacti swoon to windy breeze Quite mellow to the ear, And harmony's drooled chant can seize This desert atmosphere. . ............ . . Short Form Contest; Brian Strand 8/6/8/6 syl count--rhyme
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Krampe Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette. Desert rivers are special, and you paint a beautiful image.
Daniel Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Amazing, really feels refreshing:) a 7:)congratulations on top win with this beauty, Nette:)
Delaney Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Really beautiful in content and flowing like a stream. Congratulations on your well deserved winning place. Hugs SuZ
Sharma Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 5:24 AM
so lovely
Lamoureux Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on your top spot, I can think of no other person more worthy of nature's crown!
Watkins Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 9:25 PM
An ehereal piece. I recently moved from Arizona and this brings back memories of the beauty of the desert.
Horsch Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 12:49 PM
A wonderful win Nette, Just keep on writing these winners....Hugs...Roger
Ligon Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Elegant write, Nette. Congrats!
Arowolo Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 3:21 PM
Excellent and Beautiful write...Congrats on your superb win,great poet...
Liwayway Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Wow!! BIG CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win friend Nette..two thumbs up for you. you're such a great poet..walang halong biro..Cheers!!!!!!!!! ;)
Gasun Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 5:46 AM
Excellent poem as always my very dear friend Nette! My biggest hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Biggest hugs to u! Hope you're doing well always! Advance Merry Christmas now. love lots, Leonora
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December 13, 2013 at 11:44 PM
Nette, a wonderful win...xox..Linda
Gorelick Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:18 AM
Lovely Nette.. congrats again. BG
De Burca Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:02 AM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your win, really excellent.
Hamilton Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 9:48 AM
wow Nette fantastic well deserved win congrats Shadow x smile hugs
Undertaker Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 8:38 AM
nette congratulations.awesome poem.Thanks for the support rendered.(: ) Jenish.
Mehta Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 8:16 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem nature, Congrats, Nette
Anglesey Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Simply amazing. Every word magnificently weaved together to make it sparkle. Loved being in your desert for a few moments. going in my favs
Gasun Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 3:13 AM
My hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win my dear friend Nette! I enjoyed so much reading this stellar write of yours! Thanks a lot for the inspiring comments on my poem. I'm in Ilocos now. Talk to you soon. Big hugs! love lots, Leonora
A   Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 6:44 PM
NETTE, :-) I love the sound of "Enlightenment, Hope, and Harmony." Congratulations in Russell's contest. ~LINDA
Hunter Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 6:01 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win, Nette!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 5:53 AM
Many many congratulations Nette love xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 11:21 PM
Dear Nette, Yours is a favorite and so beautifully written. I can surely see why it is in first place. I love this poem! Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Johnson Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 7:17 PM
This is truly beautiful nette. It is nice to have you back with us. Love, Joyce
Arowolo Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 4:19 PM
Awesome and lovely piece,Nette...Congrats on your superb win in this contest..Welcome back great poet and friend...Missed you ,greatly...XOXO...
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