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when thoughts unkind and winds turn cold a heart in atrophy slowly turns to stone while severed disconnected its string gone feral the soul astray drifts off to chase the first warm breeze AP: 2nd place 2022, 3rd place 2022 Submitted on September 26, 2020 for contest IMPACT AND METAPHORS sponsored by WILLIAM KEKAULA - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on January 29, 2020

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Date: 10/3/2020 3:10:00 PM
A breathless brevity, Line, a detailed wonder like your ballon--both enjoyed--your picture truly adds, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/4/2020 5:35:00 AM
Thanks, William. Great contest ~
Date: 2/5/2020 5:00:00 PM
Totally Zen, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/5/2020 8:30:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 1/29/2020 10:13:00 PM
Yep. That's what happens alright, as you've poetically crafted it. A psycho-poetic bulls-eye, Line! :) Gershon
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Date: 1/29/2020 11:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

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