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Poetry/Limerick/Strawberry Lips
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1573-999-24
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written August 24, 2023
For the International Contest, A Fruity and Funny Limerick
Sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 09/03/2023

Second Place

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There once was a girl with strawberry lips, when she walked she like to show off her hips, all her skirts were way too short, to sneers she had a retort; JEALOUS ? ... walking on with some dips and flips !

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2023 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun Limerick write/picture. I enjoyed reading this fun read. Have a great/fun day writing away...............

Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2023 11:14:00 AM

Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2023 6:25:00 AM

Cute one Constance. Congratulations! :)

Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2023 11:14:00 AM

Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations

Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2023 4:12:00 AM

LOL, a gal with attitude

Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2023 5:20:00 AM

Jack, thank you so much for the comment

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/3/2023 4:37:00 PM

Constance, a cute one, love the imagery in the last line, congratulations on your winning placement!

Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2023 5:21:00 AM

Tania, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations

Jay Narain

Date: 8/25/2023 9:59:00 AM

Nice one.

Constance La France
Date: 8/26/2023 3:01:00 PM

Jay, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings !

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 8/25/2023 12:00:00 AM

hahaha love this :) :) :)

Constance La France
Date: 8/26/2023 3:01:00 PM

Aysha, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings !

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/24/2023 9:21:00 PM

Let them eat their hearts out! Cute one, Constance! :) ~Anaya

Constance La France
Date: 8/26/2023 3:02:00 PM

Anaya, thank you so much for the compliment, I admire people who don't care about the sneers, blessings !

David Fisher

Date: 8/24/2023 4:04:00 PM

Such a fun limerick, and the title is a knockout! Maybe 'Fruit Lips' can be a cereal for adults?

Constance La France
Date: 8/26/2023 3:03:00 PM

David, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings !