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Poetry/Limerick/Strawberry Lips
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1573-999-24
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written August 24, 2023
For the International Contest, A Fruity and Funny Limerick
Sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 09/03/2023

Second Place

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Strawberry Lips

 
There once was a girl with strawberry lips, when she walked she like to show off her hips, all her skirts were way too short, to sneers she had a retort; JEALOUS ? ... walking on with some dips and flips !
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Goldsmith Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun Limerick write/picture. I enjoyed reading this fun read. Have a great/fun day writing away...............
La France Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment
Fowler Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 6:25 AM
Cute one Constance. Congratulations! :)
La France Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 4:12 AM
LOL, a gal with attitude
La France Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:20 AM
Jack, thank you so much for the comment
Kitchin Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 4:37 PM
Constance, a cute one, love the imagery in the last line, congratulations on your winning placement!
La France Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Tania, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations
Nuwas Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 12:00 AM
hahaha love this :) :) :)
La France Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Aysha, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings !
Anaya Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 9:21 PM
Let them eat their hearts out! Cute one, Constance! :) ~Anaya
La France Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 3:02 PM
Anaya, thank you so much for the compliment, I admire people who don't care about the sneers, blessings !
Fisher Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Such a fun limerick, and the title is a knockout! Maybe 'Fruit Lips' can be a cereal for adults?
La France Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 3:03 PM
David, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings !
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