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Strawberry Ice Cream

Dish held my sugar cone Ice cream of plump strawberries they were not alone Sunny afternoon this was sweet when I was young Hushed my talking tongue. Date Written: 6/19/2022 1 Place Note: Acrostic Rhyme Ice Cream Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/20/2022 7:01:00 AM

Wonderful poem, Paula. I especially liked the final line - such a delight. Ice cream does hush children chattering. Be well. Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2022 8:46:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. A tongue filled with strawberry ice cream can not talk. Maybe more kids need ice cream. Hahahaha Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/20/2022 2:24:00 AM

Congratulations on the top spot win with your strawberry ice cream acrostic Paula. I remember this mouthwatering treat from my childhood, though times were hard being one of five sisters somehow my mother would surprise us with the delightful, occasional strawberry and ice cream dessert … Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2022 8:44:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Great memories are the best kind to have and strawberry ice cream can make them even better. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/18/2022 6:53:00 AM

Tantalizing poem Paula! Congratulations on your win! Linda

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2022 11:55:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Guess we all need a dish of ice cream. A great summer way to cool off. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Len Gasun

Date: 7/18/2022 1:47:00 AM

Wow! Excellicious acrostic poem with great rhyme! I love your poem my dear friend Paula! Big Congratulations on your well-deserved first/top win and this amazing write! Thanks for sharing! God bless you. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2022 11:54:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you love my Acrostic Rhyme. Now for some ice cream??? Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Valsa George

Date: 7/17/2022 7:06:00 PM

Wow ..... once again back to your cute poem to congratulate you on your First place win ! Enjoy !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2022 11:52:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my cute Strawberry Ice Cream acrostic write. I guess my mind lives on Cute Street. Hahahah. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

John Watt

Date: 7/17/2022 3:52:00 PM

Paula, congratulations for your #1 win and thank you for sharing your tasty poetry with us ~ John

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2022 11:49:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my tasty Strawberry Ice Cream acrostic write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/17/2022 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win with your delightfully delicious acrostic! Very clever and mouthwatering! Blessings to you!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 2:06:00 PM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this delicious acrostic write. I wish I could everyone a dish. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/17/2022 9:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your FIRST PLACE Paula...Love it! I knew there were so many good ones, glad you got it! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 9:38:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you love this one. It was fun to write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Eve Roper

Date: 7/17/2022 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Julia’s contest. I like your poem

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 8:57:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this Acrostic write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/17/2022 5:43:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, with your delectable delightful ice cream. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 8:55:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my fun write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/17/2022 4:19:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your first place win with your sweet poem!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 8:54:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my sweet "Strawberry Ice Cream" DISH write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/16/2022 7:56:00 PM

Warm congratulations on cold strawberry icecream! Enjoy your top win, Paula! Beautifully penned indeed

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 8:52:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my fun/cold "Strawberry Ice Cream" write. Now for a dish. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 7/16/2022 1:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest; a deliciously penned piece. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 8:51:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my "Strawberry Ice Cream" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/16/2022 12:56:00 PM

Congratulations on such a awesome write and win:) God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 8:49:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this fun ice cream write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/16/2022 12:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful Trophy win Paula. Nice Acrostic, and such a sweet message. Blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 8:49:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this Acrostic fun write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/16/2022 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful Trophy win Paula. Now I am feeling nostalgic and craving ice cream. Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 8:42:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this write. Yes, I am also craving ice cream. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/16/2022 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations, Paula, on your top win. This is a cute little Acrostic with huge depth! Brilliant work, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 8:28:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this Acrostic write. You say, "Brilliant Work,???" Thanks, you made my day. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Howard Kerr

Date: 7/16/2022 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations Paula on your first place podium win in this challenging contest. Excellent work Howard

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 8:24:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. You say, " Excellent work,???" Thanks, you made my day. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Julia Ward

Date: 7/16/2022 10:33:00 AM

By far the best of all forty entries! Well done for its top win my contest, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 8:22:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win in your Ice Cream Contest. I enjoyed writing my Strawberry Ice Cream "Dish." Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Emilia James

Date: 6/24/2022 2:46:00 PM

One of my favourite flavours of ice cream. Got to admit keeps me quiet for a while too lol. Emilia : )

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2022 2:05:00 PM

Thank You, for your visit. Good to see you. I love Strawberry but I also love mint chocolate chip. Amazing how it keeps the tongue from talking. Wish I had a cold dish. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/23/2022 8:48:00 AM

I like your angle of approach to this contest Paula, my mother used to say the only time we were quiet was when eating dessert (Strawberries and ice cream) after dinner on Sundays, all the best for contest, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/23/2022 9:37:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your best. Good to see you. Amazing how Ice Cream will keep the tongue from talking. Wish I had a dish. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/21/2022 3:11:00 AM

Hello Paula, Strawberry ice-cream what more could we want...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2022 8:07:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit. Good to see you. How about a double scoop??? Have a great/blessed day writing away...................

Michael Tor

Date: 6/20/2022 7:39:00 PM

Tasty and wonderful Paula. Be blessed my Dear...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2022 8:05:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit. Good to see you. Glad you like my happy/sweet Strawberry Ice Cream write. Summer is the best time for Ice Cream and sugar cones. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................

Alkas Poetry

Date: 6/20/2022 4:10:00 PM

super tasty poetry mixed with strawberry ice cream I really want to have one right now! salute alkas.... v

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2022 8:02:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit. Glad you like my Strawberry Ice Cream write. Have a great/blessed day..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/20/2022 2:36:00 PM

This happy poem is so nice to read, just after having some of my favorite ice cream, Paula. Your mouthwatering images make it a fine contender in the contest. Good luck! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2022 2:43:00 PM

Thank You, for your visit and for your good luck. Glad you like my happy/sweet write. Summer is the best time for Strawberry Ice Cream in a sugar cone. Have a great/blessed~~day/week...............