Paula Goldsmith Poet Acrostic

Strawberry Ice Cream

Dish held my sugar cone
Ice cream of plump strawberries they were not alone
Sunny afternoon this was sweet when I was young
Hushed my talking tongue.



Date Written: 6/19/2022

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Note: Acrostic Rhyme 
Ice Cream Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Brian Sambourne July 20, 2022 at 7:01 AM Wonderful poem, Paula. I especially liked the final line - such a delight. Ice cream does hush children chattering. Be well. Brian Paula Goldsmith July 20, 2022 at 8:46 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. A tongue filled with strawberry ice cream can not talk. Maybe more kids need ice cream. Hahahaha Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Beryl Edmonds July 20, 2022 at 2:24 AM Congratulations on the top spot win with your strawberry ice cream acrostic Paula. I remember this mouthwatering treat from my childhood, though times were hard being one of five sisters somehow my mother would surprise us with the delightful, occasional strawberry and ice cream dessert … Belle Paula Goldsmith July 20, 2022 at 8:44 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Great memories are the best kind to have and strawberry ice cream can make them even better. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Linda Alice Fowler July 18, 2022 at 6:53 AM Tantalizing poem Paula! Congratulations on your win! Linda Paula Goldsmith July 18, 2022 at 11:55 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Guess we all need a dish of ice cream. A great summer way to cool off. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Len Gasun July 18, 2022 at 1:47 AM Wow! Excellicious acrostic poem with great rhyme! I love your poem my dear friend Paula! Big Congratulations on your well-deserved first/top win and this amazing write! Thanks for sharing! God bless you. Hugs Paula Goldsmith July 18, 2022 at 11:54 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you love my Acrostic Rhyme. Now for some ice cream??? Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Valsa George July 17, 2022 at 7:06 PM Wow ..... once again back to your cute poem to congratulate you on your First place win ! Enjoy ! Paula Goldsmith July 18, 2022 at 11:52 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my cute Strawberry Ice Cream acrostic write. I guess my mind lives on Cute Street. Hahahah. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

John Watt July 17, 2022 at 3:52 PM Paula, congratulations for your #1 win and thank you for sharing your tasty poetry with us ~ John Paula Goldsmith July 18, 2022 at 11:49 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my tasty Strawberry Ice Cream acrostic write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Sam Kauffman July 17, 2022 at 12:23 PM Congratulations on your first place win with your delightfully delicious acrostic! Very clever and mouthwatering! Blessings to you! Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 2:06 PM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this delicious acrostic write. I wish I could everyone a dish. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

I Am Anaya July 17, 2022 at 9:08 AM Congratulations on your FIRST PLACE Paula...Love it! I knew there were so many good ones, glad you got it! :) Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 9:38 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you love this one. It was fun to write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Eve Roper July 17, 2022 at 6:18 AM Congratulations on your win in Julia’s contest. I like your poem Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 8:57 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this Acrostic write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Beata Agustin July 17, 2022 at 5:43 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, with your delectable delightful ice cream. God bless you. Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 8:55 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my fun write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Tania Kitchin July 17, 2022 at 4:19 AM Paula, congratulations on your first place win with your sweet poem! Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 8:54 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my sweet "Strawberry Ice Cream" DISH write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Unseeking Seeker July 16, 2022 at 7:56 PM Warm congratulations on cold strawberry icecream! Enjoy your top win, Paula! Beautifully penned indeed Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 8:52 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my fun/cold "Strawberry Ice Cream" write. Now for a dish. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Paulette Calasibetta July 16, 2022 at 1:10 PM Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest; a deliciously penned piece. :)Paulette Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 8:51 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like my "Strawberry Ice Cream" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Regina Mcintosh July 16, 2022 at 12:56 PM Congratulations on such a awesome write and win:) God bless you friend. Love, Gina Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 8:49 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this fun ice cream write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Sotto Poet July 16, 2022 at 12:16 PM Congratulations on your wonderful Trophy win Paula. Nice Acrostic, and such a sweet message. Blessings Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 8:49 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this Acrostic fun write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Connie Marcum Wong July 16, 2022 at 11:48 AM Congratulations on your wonderful Trophy win Paula. Now I am feeling nostalgic and craving ice cream. Blessings xxoo Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 8:42 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this write. Yes, I am also craving ice cream. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 16, 2022 at 11:19 AM Congratulations, Paula, on your top win. This is a cute little Acrostic with huge depth! Brilliant work, Paula. Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 8:28 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. Glad you like this Acrostic write. You say, "Brilliant Work,???" Thanks, you made my day. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Howard Kerr July 16, 2022 at 11:05 AM Congratulations Paula on your first place podium win in this challenging contest. Excellent work Howard Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 8:24 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win. You say, " Excellent work,???" Thanks, you made my day. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Julia Ward July 16, 2022 at 10:33 AM By far the best of all forty entries! Well done for its top win my contest, Paula. Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 8:22 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win in your Ice Cream Contest. I enjoyed writing my Strawberry Ice Cream "Dish."  Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Emilia James June 24, 2022 at 2:46 PM One of my favourite flavours of ice cream. Got to admit keeps me quiet for a while too lol. Emilia : ) Paula Goldsmith June 25, 2022 at 2:05 PM Thank You, for your visit. Good to see you. I love Strawberry but I also love mint chocolate chip. Amazing how it keeps the tongue from talking. Wish I had a cold dish. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

David Kavanagh June 23, 2022 at 8:48 AM I like your angle of approach to this contest Paula, my mother used to say the only time we were quiet was when eating dessert (Strawberries and ice cream) after dinner on Sundays, all the best for contest, cheers David Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2022 at 9:37 AM Thank You, for your visit and for your best. Good to see you. Amazing how Ice Cream will keep the tongue from talking. Wish I had a dish. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................

Delice Arleen Skelly June 21, 2022 at 3:11 AM Hello Paula, Strawberry ice-cream what more could we want...Delice Paula Goldsmith June 21, 2022 at 8:07 AM Thank You, for your visit. Good to see you. How about a double scoop??? Have a great/blessed day writing away...................

Michael Tor June 20, 2022 at 7:39 PM Tasty and wonderful Paula. Be blessed my Dear... Paula Goldsmith June 21, 2022 at 8:05 AM Thank You, for your visit. Good to see you. Glad you like my happy/sweet Strawberry Ice Cream write. Summer is the best time for Ice Cream and sugar cones. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................

Alkas Poetry June 20, 2022 at 4:10 PM super tasty poetry mixed with strawberry ice cream I really want to have one right now! salute alkas.... v Paula Goldsmith June 21, 2022 at 8:02 AM Thank You, for your visit. Glad you like my Strawberry Ice Cream write. Have a great/blessed day..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 20, 2022 at 2:36 PM This happy poem is so nice to read, just after having some of my favorite ice cream, Paula. Your mouthwatering images make it a fine contender in the contest. Good luck! :) Paula Goldsmith June 20, 2022 at 2:43 PM Thank You, for your visit and for your good luck. Glad you like my happy/sweet write. Summer is the best time for Strawberry Ice Cream in a sugar cone. Have a great/blessed~~day/week...............

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