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I've known you not with soft dreams You wrapped me close in curled palms Now I breathe you lush, warm, sweet The dreams yet wake midst isle arms. Written and submitted on September 4, 2019 For the "Four Lines Of Melodic Poetry" Poetry Contest Nette Onclaud, Sponsor. ( Syllables = seven per line, counted at HowManySyllables.com )

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Date: 9/6/2019 7:56:00 PM
Superb imagery and flow in this excellent piece my friend.. A fav-- a true beauty..
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Date: 9/5/2019 1:27:00 PM
Lush write G, strangers in paradise indeed! Nette should love this!
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Date: 9/4/2019 7:59:00 AM
Oh, lovely. Elegant! My best to you in the contest love xomo <3
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Date: 9/4/2019 5:05:00 AM
"midst isle arms." NICE...
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