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Stranger

You are a stranger
With a different color
With a different nose
With different eyes and ears

Once upon a time
The world was familiar
Where we exchanged roses
Where we shared mirth
That time we mourned for severing
The world was big and
Beautiful like a poem

The season has changed
Leaves have rusted
Earth has burned and cracked
With a new painted face
You are a stranger
With a different color
With a different nose
With different eyes and ears.

-puvi-

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Jannie Breedt Date: 12/11/2016 5:55:00 PM A stranger is just a feiend you do not know. Hugs Jannie Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 12/16/2016 1:01:00 AM thanks for the comment jannie :) hugs :)) stay blessed

Liam Mcdaid Date: 12/28/2015 7:01:00 PM beautifully painted vision excellent pen Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 12/28/2015 8:38:00 PM thank you liam for the lovely comment..valuing your time :)) love and peace

John Fleming Date: 11/20/2015 9:59:00 AM Congrats on your POTD! An intriguing read...Some really quite elegant lines. Very nicely done - Best regards! :-) john P.s A very worthy 7. Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 11/20/2015 10:31:00 AM thank you John for your time, wonderful comment and lovely 7... Love and peace..take care :)

Rizwana Bhurani Date: 11/18/2015 12:02:00 AM A cute,simple poetic piece with profound thoughts Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 11/18/2015 1:15:00 AM thank you Rizwana for this wonderful comment and your time :) God bless dear :*

Kp Nunez Date: 10/30/2015 9:28:00 AM Congrats, ROSSE, on your POTD. Sorry I was late. :-) Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/30/2015 9:59:00 AM WOW..thank you soo much Kim...love to receive your wishes :) :* it is said that better late than never ;) so no worries...cheers... :* loves and hugs

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/29/2015 1:41:00 PM Congrats on being POTD, Remnants....The message here is deep and heartfelt. Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/29/2015 9:48:00 PM Aww..thank you eileen for the lovely comment..will visit you soon..:)) god bless

Rainbow Promise Date: 10/26/2015 7:53:00 PM Good write. Loved it. God bless. Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/26/2015 8:25:00 PM Thank you rainbow promise for reading and your time..love and peace..:)) :*

Tim Smith Date: 10/26/2015 5:02:00 PM Congrats Remnants on POTD...well written Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/26/2015 8:27:00 PM Thank you tim..god bless.. :)) :*

Neva Romaine Date: 10/26/2015 2:54:00 PM Hey Remnants, a hearty congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD! It is so poignant and with deep and affecting message. Excellent writing and expression. Well deserving! Be Blessed, Neva Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/26/2015 8:29:00 PM Wow...what a beautiful comment!! Thank you so much neva..you made my day..love,peace and happiness to you..stay blessed :)) :*

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2015 2:29:00 PM - Great ! - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/26/2015 8:29:00 PM Thank you anne lise..lovess and hugs :)) :*

Ralph Sergi Date: 10/26/2015 12:08:00 PM Hi Remnan: Beautiful metaphoric prose! What we need is less tribes and more diversity. Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/26/2015 8:32:00 PM Thank you ralph..i used to wonder when this person gonna comment on my work, while reading your comments in some poet frenz workd in PS.:)) thank you for your time and read..stay blessed..:)) :*

Eric Boddie Date: 10/26/2015 9:36:00 AM until the end of time....strangers are all we find....because not a single one of us knows....just how another's mind goes....so being a stranger really doesn't seem odd....because we are all strangers to everyone but God....Only He Knows For Sure....;) Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/26/2015 9:56:00 AM Indeed!! I see a different I in a mirror ;) Thank you for your time Eric :) God bless :*

Eve Roper Date: 10/26/2015 8:43:00 AM Love the write congratulations on poem of the day! Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/26/2015 8:57:00 AM thank you for your time and compliment Eve :) God bless.. love & peace :*

Alexis Y. Date: 10/26/2015 8:09:00 AM Congratulations on getting the pome of the day! Enjoy the honor:-)Alexis Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/26/2015 8:56:00 AM thank you Alexis :) :* God bless...

Casarah Nance Date: 10/26/2015 8:04:00 AM Well done, grats on poem of the day :) Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/26/2015 8:56:00 AM thank you Casarah :) :* God bless

Lin Lane Date: 10/26/2015 7:02:00 AM How happy I am to see that you have POTD! well-deserved. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/26/2015 7:30:00 AM you're very welcome. Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/26/2015 7:25:00 AM Wow....i am so happy to know the happy news through you Lane..thank you..:)) :*

Lin Lane Date: 10/24/2015 1:19:00 PM Remnants, I'm so glad you posted your version of Strangers...It's wonderful. Thanks again for reading mine.... We seem to change with relationships. It got you a favs from John, and from me. Login to Reply Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 10/24/2015 8:54:00 PM WOW Lane...You kept your word and I love it :) :* I am glad to be in your favs..Thank you friend :)) God bless you..Love, peace & happiness to you dear