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Stranger

You are a stranger With a different color With a different nose With different eyes and ears Once upon a time The world was familiar Where we exchanged roses Where we shared mirth That time we mourned for severing The world was big and Beautiful like a poem The season has changed Leaves have rusted Earth has burned and cracked With a new painted face You are a stranger With a different color With a different nose With different eyes and ears. -puvi-

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 12/11/2016 5:55:00 PM

A stranger is just a feiend you do not know. Hugs Jannie

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/16/2016 1:01:00 AM

thanks for the comment jannie :) hugs :)) stay blessed

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/28/2015 7:01:00 PM

beautifully painted vision excellent pen

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/28/2015 8:38:00 PM

thank you liam for the lovely comment..valuing your time :)) love and peace

John Fleming

Date: 11/20/2015 9:59:00 AM

Congrats on your POTD! An intriguing read...Some really quite elegant lines. Very nicely done - Best regards! :-) john P.s A very worthy 7.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/20/2015 10:31:00 AM

thank you John for your time, wonderful comment and lovely 7... Love and peace..take care :)

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 11/18/2015 12:02:00 AM

A cute,simple poetic piece with profound thoughts

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/18/2015 1:15:00 AM

thank you Rizwana for this wonderful comment and your time :) God bless dear :*

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/30/2015 9:28:00 AM

Congrats, ROSSE, on your POTD. Sorry I was late. :-)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/30/2015 9:59:00 AM

WOW..thank you soo much Kim...love to receive your wishes :) :* it is said that better late than never ;) so no worries...cheers... :* loves and hugs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/29/2015 1:41:00 PM

Congrats on being POTD, Remnants....The message here is deep and heartfelt.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/29/2015 9:48:00 PM

Aww..thank you eileen for the lovely comment..will visit you soon..:)) god bless

Rainbow Promise

Date: 10/26/2015 7:53:00 PM

Good write. Loved it. God bless.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/26/2015 8:25:00 PM

Thank you rainbow promise for reading and your time..love and peace..:)) :*

Tim Smith

Date: 10/26/2015 5:02:00 PM

Congrats Remnants on POTD...well written

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/26/2015 8:27:00 PM

Thank you tim..god bless.. :)) :*

Neva Romaine

Date: 10/26/2015 2:54:00 PM

Hey Remnants, a hearty congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD! It is so poignant and with deep and affecting message. Excellent writing and expression. Well deserving! Be Blessed, Neva

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/26/2015 8:29:00 PM

Wow...what a beautiful comment!! Thank you so much neva..you made my day..love,peace and happiness to you..stay blessed :)) :*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2015 2:29:00 PM

- Great ! - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/26/2015 8:29:00 PM

Thank you anne lise..lovess and hugs :)) :*

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/26/2015 12:08:00 PM

Hi Remnan: Beautiful metaphoric prose! What we need is less tribes and more diversity.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/26/2015 8:32:00 PM

Thank you ralph..i used to wonder when this person gonna comment on my work, while reading your comments in some poet frenz workd in PS.:)) thank you for your time and read..stay blessed..:)) :*

Eric Boddie

Date: 10/26/2015 9:36:00 AM

until the end of time....strangers are all we find....because not a single one of us knows....just how another's mind goes....so being a stranger really doesn't seem odd....because we are all strangers to everyone but God....Only He Knows For Sure....;)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/26/2015 9:56:00 AM

Indeed!! I see a different I in a mirror ;) Thank you for your time Eric :) God bless :*

Eve Roper

Date: 10/26/2015 8:43:00 AM

Love the write congratulations on poem of the day!

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/26/2015 8:57:00 AM

thank you for your time and compliment Eve :) God bless.. love & peace :*

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/26/2015 8:09:00 AM

Congratulations on getting the pome of the day! Enjoy the honor:-)Alexis

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/26/2015 8:56:00 AM

thank you Alexis :) :* God bless...

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/26/2015 8:04:00 AM

Well done, grats on poem of the day :)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/26/2015 8:56:00 AM

thank you Casarah :) :* God bless

Lin Lane

Date: 10/26/2015 7:02:00 AM

How happy I am to see that you have POTD! well-deserved.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/26/2015 7:30:00 AM

you're very welcome.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/26/2015 7:25:00 AM

Wow....i am so happy to know the happy news through you Lane..thank you..:)) :*

Lin Lane

Date: 10/24/2015 1:19:00 PM

Remnants, I'm so glad you posted your version of Strangers...It's wonderful. Thanks again for reading mine.... We seem to change with relationships. It got you a favs from John, and from me.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/24/2015 8:54:00 PM

WOW Lane...You kept your word and I love it :) :* I am glad to be in your favs..Thank you friend :)) God bless you..Love, peace & happiness to you dear