Punnia Viswan Bhatia Poet Free verse

Stranger

You are a stranger
With a different color
With a different nose
With different eyes and ears

Once upon a time
The world was familiar
Where we exchanged roses
Where we shared mirth
That time we mourned for severing
The world was big and
Beautiful like a poem

The season has changed
Leaves have rusted
Earth has burned and cracked
With a new painted face
You are a stranger
With a different color
With a different nose
With different eyes and ears.

-puvi-

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Jannie Breedt December 11, 2016 at 5:55 PM A stranger is just a feiend you do not know. Hugs Jannie Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 16, 2016 at 1:01 AM thanks for the comment jannie :) hugs :)) stay blessed

Liam Mcdaid December 28, 2015 at 7:01 PM beautifully painted vision excellent pen Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 28, 2015 at 8:38 PM thank you liam for the lovely comment..valuing your time :)) love and peace

John Fleming November 20, 2015 at 9:59 AM Congrats on your POTD! An intriguing read...Some really quite elegant lines. Very nicely done - Best regards! :-) john P.s A very worthy 7. Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 20, 2015 at 10:31 AM thank you John for your time, wonderful comment and lovely 7... Love and peace..take care :)

Rizwana Bhurani November 18, 2015 at 12:02 AM A cute,simple poetic piece with profound thoughts Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 18, 2015 at 1:15 AM thank you Rizwana for this wonderful comment and your time :) God bless dear :*

Kp Nunez October 30, 2015 at 9:28 AM Congrats, ROSSE, on your POTD. Sorry I was late. :-) Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 30, 2015 at 9:59 AM WOW..thank you soo much Kim...love to receive your wishes :) :* it is said that better late than never ;) so no worries...cheers... :* loves and hugs

Eileen Manassian October 29, 2015 at 1:41 PM Congrats on being POTD, Remnants....The message here is deep and heartfelt. Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 29, 2015 at 9:48 PM Aww..thank you eileen for the lovely comment..will visit you soon..:)) god bless

Rainbow Promise October 26, 2015 at 7:53 PM Good write. Loved it. God bless. Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 26, 2015 at 8:25 PM Thank you rainbow promise for reading and your time..love and peace..:)) :*

Tim Smith October 26, 2015 at 5:02 PM Congrats Remnants on POTD...well written Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 26, 2015 at 8:27 PM Thank you tim..god bless.. :)) :*

Neva Romaine October 26, 2015 at 2:54 PM Hey Remnants, a hearty congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD! It is so poignant and with deep and affecting message. Excellent writing and expression. Well deserving! Be Blessed, Neva Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 26, 2015 at 8:29 PM Wow...what a beautiful comment!! Thank you so much neva..you made my day..love,peace and happiness to you..stay blessed :)) :*

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2015 at 2:29 PM - Great ! - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 26, 2015 at 8:29 PM Thank you anne lise..lovess and hugs :)) :*

Ralph Sergi October 26, 2015 at 12:08 PM Hi Remnan: Beautiful metaphoric prose! What we need is less tribes and more diversity. Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 26, 2015 at 8:32 PM Thank you ralph..i used to wonder when this person gonna comment on my work, while reading your comments in some poet frenz workd in PS.:)) thank you for your time and read..stay blessed..:)) :*

Eric Boddie October 26, 2015 at 9:36 AM until the end of time....strangers are all we find....because not a single one of us knows....just how another's mind goes....so being a stranger really doesn't seem odd....because we are all strangers to everyone but God....Only He Knows For Sure....;) Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 26, 2015 at 9:56 AM Indeed!! I see a different I in a mirror ;) Thank you for your time Eric :) God bless :*

Eve Roper October 26, 2015 at 8:43 AM Love the write congratulations on poem of the day! Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 26, 2015 at 8:57 AM thank you for your time and compliment Eve :) God bless.. love & peace :*

Alexis Y. October 26, 2015 at 8:09 AM Congratulations on getting the pome of the day! Enjoy the honor:-)Alexis Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 26, 2015 at 8:56 AM thank you Alexis :) :* God bless...

Casarah Nance October 26, 2015 at 8:04 AM Well done, grats on poem of the day :) Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 26, 2015 at 8:56 AM thank you Casarah :) :* God bless

Lin Lane October 26, 2015 at 7:02 AM How happy I am to see that you have POTD! well-deserved. Lin Lane October 26, 2015 at 7:30 AM you're very welcome. Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 26, 2015 at 7:25 AM Wow....i am so happy to know the happy news through you Lane..thank you..:)) :*

Lin Lane October 24, 2015 at 1:19 PM Remnants, I'm so glad you posted your version of Strangers...It's wonderful. Thanks again for reading mine.... We seem to change with relationships. It got you a favs from John, and from me. Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 24, 2015 at 8:54 PM WOW Lane...You kept your word and I love it :) :* I am glad to be in your favs..Thank you friend :)) God bless you..Love, peace & happiness to you dear