Strange Traditions: From An Explorer's Diary

The Sun People believe
they came from the Sun-
they avoid darkness like the plague
they believe darkness is a soul's eraser!

The Cricket People:
There is a contest bachelors do-
one who sounds like a cricket for long,
marries a beautiful bride!

Cult of the Crab:
Members enter their temple
walking sideways;
one who walks normally 
becomes an outcast.

The Fish People spend most
of their time in water. They
believe the one who is Enlightened
is one who develops gills and scales
like their Fish ancestors!

Disciples of Light:
They believe that their souls are cleansed
of their sins if they sleep under the Sun
for a whole day!


(the rest of the findings disappeared near a volcano)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Cheema Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Let the world sleep under the sun for a day and all will be cleansed! Conrats n your win Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so much Balveen!!! :-)
May Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Congrats on your win!
Kimathi Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Joseph!!! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 6:13 PM
oh I can see it was for a contest that you won. WAs it the humorous contest? Now it all makes sense!!
Kimathi Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Hahahaha. Thank you for making my day Andrea!!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 6:12 PM
gosh, this is so fascinating. What were you doing these verses for? A challenge or is it all in your imagination? or is it something that you read about? I really enjoyed this.
Kimathi Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Lolest!!! Imagination can take you anywhere!! ;-) Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my work!!!
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 6:13 PM
well written Teddy congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 6:25 AM
Thank you very much Jan!!! *^_^*
Scars Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Teddy, congrats on your placement in this awesome poem! :)-luloo
Kimathi Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 6:24 AM
Thanks so much Laura!! *^_^*
Nance Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Really makes ya think! thanks for entering :)
Kimathi Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 6:24 AM
Welcome Casarah!! *^_^* Thank you for your applause...
La France Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 8:04 AM
Teddy, great write, very though provoking, 7 ~
Kimathi Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Thank you for enjoying the piece BW! *^_^*
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