Strand's Revenge (Footle)

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Mr. Strand I now think in short hand on the way to the grocery, in the middle of the movies,
brushing my teeth and many other places that used to be used for,,,okay well something else 
and I'm sure it was really important.  I've had so much fun reading these and now 
developing an addiction to writing them as well.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 1:27 AM
Thanks for supportin g my contest Laurie.Rgds Brian
Strand Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 4:10 AM
Sorry about that Laurie !.I'm thrilled the way the footle form has been developed with variations/sequence in recent days.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Ehigiator Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 5:26 PM
LOL, so true, I started last night and just couldn't stop..Great Job Ms Ladee, these are soooo much fun and oh so addicting..God Bless friend, Tyesha
Reynolds Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 3:49 PM
HA! ME TOO! lol Darn it brina, you've got us all foot'ling every second of the day! lol great one, L, love, Kristin
Townsend Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 3:28 PM
It is very addicting isn't it? You express it so well in this beautiful example of the virus we all seem to have caught. Smiles from Lolita
Moreno Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 3:09 PM
Nice footle, I totally agree with your note...Raul
Gass Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 2:02 PM
Nice footling, Laurie! I see you caught the bug! Nice job! Love, Robin
Devonshire Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 1:17 PM
Laurie, I'm afraid I also suffer from Footle Syndrome. Love your verse! Footles are truly addicting! Love, Carolyn
Atanacio Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 10:12 AM
strange you are wonderfully
Richards Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Soup mail reply, Miss Ginn:)
P. Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 7:48 AM
haha!! good one there... i too... listen more ... interpret things differently!! funny how these are so addictive... and about the toad... omg!! thats the last thing i want... frogs, lizards, toads... fishes everyhting freak me OUT!! no way... i can't imagine how you can actually not be afraid to throw bugs into them... well you are one crazy woman aren't you??!? have a nice day!! ~ Arany
Gorelick Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 7:47 AM
Hes got us twisting in the wind. Even my grandson is writing footles..This should get first place. BG
Winter Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 7:37 AM
Very funny Laurie. The mind is a strange place. ~lol~ Good one. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 7:29 AM
Dang it...now a corsage would probably make me sneeze.....it didn't way back then!! PS. don't forget some of those dresses had a pinafore!! (do they even make those anymore??)
Richards Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Yep....you got it sister!! New bonnet, patent mary jane shoes, white gloves, hair slicked down into french braids...the whole nine yards!!!
Richards Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 6:38 AM
My first smile of the day, once again, Miss Laurie...you put it there!! (Seldom am I smiling before I have my coffee.....so you are a miracle worker!!) !!!!!!:)
Jordan Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 6:23 AM
Wonderful in every single way - God Bless, MJ
Higgins Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 6:06 AM
Very good one Laurie..thanks for the smile.
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