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Straight and Narrow -Formally Test

I have Been Relegated Condemned To follow The straight And narrow Path Of Poetic Minimalism I shall not Stray From behaving In this way Its the straight And narrow All the way From now on For me Straight Arrow No more Than a few Words I can Say Its the new Style Of Poetry DONT stray I shall abide Keep things Straight Narrow Like The Indians Arrow I shoot this Poem Over your way Do not laugh Nor should you Play From now on Its the straight And narrow All the way If you wish Spaces That’s ok too As Long as You know Straight and Narrow Is still for You That’s the rule So don’t be blue If you cant beat them join them!!!!!!!!!!!! Notes: The formatting issues of short lines and double spaces seems to be fixed, however if anyone needs help to fix their posts feel free to email me, be happy to assist. I stand corrected, there still seems to be issues. However, it seems if you post in the Chrome browser is ok. I have tried in in Firefox and sometimes it works, and sometimes not.

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Date: 8/10/2014 2:11:00 PM
My browser Firefox and the editing is sometimes an issue for me but anyhow I try to edit it in iPad and there it comes out the way I want it tobe..:) I'll email you sometime..:p
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Date: 8/10/2014 6:56:00 AM
Arthur! what happened, did they give you electric shock in rehab? Baby you know, straight and narrow, or curved and crazy, I'll still dig ya ;-) xox
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Date: 8/9/2014 1:35:00 PM
I failed
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/9/2014 8:55:00 PM
Leave the keys to your place under the mat..tyia
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/9/2014 8:53:00 PM
I got more comments with a poem "test" I am gonna go jump off a bridge now
Date: 8/9/2014 1:12:00 PM
I think this is the best thing you've ever written....just teasing. there is still some formatting glitches...:( hugs sweets
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/9/2014 8:51:00 PM
ok all you smarty pants, I re-did this, since I got all the comments anways!!!!!!
Date: 8/9/2014 12:31:00 PM
Hello?
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/9/2014 8:52:00 PM
Hi Eileen, was testing the formatting issues here. Hope you are doing well!!! Hugs

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