Notes About The Poem

painting by Catrin Welz-Stein

Storybook

She holds the book  
like it’s a living thing~  
a small, breathing lantern of thought  
opening in her hands.  

Letters rise from the page,  
blue-bright and weightless,  
as though the story has decided  
it can no longer be contained.  

They drift upward,  
carrying pieces of her~  
curiosity, memory,  
the quiet ache of what she’s lived  
and what she longs to understand.  

In their ascent  
she feels something shift:  
the way destiny sometimes arrives  
not as a path  
but as a sentence  
finally breaking free.  

And for a moment  
she is both reader and written,  
the book and the becoming~  
watching her own story  
lift into the air  
to show her what it means.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kauffman Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 12:44 PM
Sara, happy Monday! What a wonderful way to start the week by reading these wonderfully created lines that take me into the story as reader and into the story as the main character! So creative, my friend! Wonderful descriptions - as always! Blessings and grace to you!
George Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 8:40 PM
Love the analogy of the book as "a small, breathing lantern of thought". How poetic and imaginative! Again it is a great moment when "she is both reader and written,". How you have expressed the influence of a good book on the reader when the reader and the book no longer stay separate. Great poem, dear Sara.
Jones Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 7:21 PM
Your poetry is unique and engaging. Your opening lines hook and like a fish I swim within your words! Thank you for sharing this.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 2:46 PM
Your Ekphrasis poem is so profound - I love it more because I can relate to the picture of holding a book, and the "breaking free" of a girl.
Terry Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 6:12 PM
My favorite line here is "she is both reader and written". There is an empowering tone to this poem that I enjoyed.✍️
Loving Iii Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 7:39 PM
Somewhat discriptive. but it holds the ideal of giving words life. And meaning.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 1:00 PM
Your "Storybook" is a wonderful write with a great picture. Love This One... The writer, writes for their reader. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Are your squirrels on vacation??? Have a wonderful day writing away...............
Buhagiar Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 10:46 PM
You write a wonderful poem and hope you will obtain a high placing.✨
Maverick Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 1:54 PM
Thought and awareness, hard to convey It all.' You do a good one here Sara.'
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:30 PM
many thanks, Joe, for your visit and kindness
Loving Iii Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 5:43 PM
What it means to be a poet.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:30 PM
agree😊
Daniel Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 8:38 AM
If this is for Brian's contest, a super winner, Sara😊 you do this form great justice👏
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:33 PM
appreciate you!
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 12:19 AM
Beautiful, Sara.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:33 PM
thank you, dear Andrea
blegh Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 3:27 PM
beautiful read! <3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:33 PM
thank you
DiMino Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 5:52 AM
A FAV Sara!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:32 PM
humbly grateful, Joe.
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 5:14 AM
Wow!! Sara B., thank you for sharing this one with us. I like your work in every way, and the artwork is so interesting. Creativity on both sides. Way to go. 👍👏✍️. Sara K.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 5:32 PM
thanks, Sara K, for your kindness and support...means a great deal to me...glad you enjoy my work. wishing you well, hugs and blessings, Sara
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