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Story Tellers Secret

I sat with a reluctant story teller My legs crossed Holding my breath The fabric of her mind was tightly folded Tucked in at her edges I reached for a thread gave it a gentle tug Hoping that it would come loose My desire was to know her secrets Her's were the tales I so desperately craved She smiled a knowing smile Looked deeply into my eyes I gazed back resolutely Searching for my prize She whispered "Listen close Within my hands I hold the ghosts They scream with force to be released You will not be protected by your Priest I'm trying my best to hold them back If they escape They will attack" My childish wonder turned to fear Could real Ghosts have followed her here As I wondered she began to laugh Within my soul I felt a draft I got my wish Storied spirits made me cold I could not handle the tale she told I ran away through the forest Spirits close behind her thread had attached quickly to my mind The reluctant story teller she knew me best My little mind had failed her test The ghostly spirits wrapped silver threads around my soul My eyes of blue turned black as coal I am a reluctant story teller The fabric of my mind tightly folded Tucked in at the edges You sit cross legged Holding your breath "Come a little closer so that I might whisper in your ear". Dedicated to my Friend Vicky a story teller Extrodinaire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/29/2013 5:14:00 PM
I don't think I'll come any closer thank you Rick, had enough of those whispers in my ear in the past lol. Great tale well written. Take care Richard
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Date: 7/23/2013 6:30:00 PM
This made me smile. I really love how it ended. A lot. Very nice piece. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2013 7:00:00 PM
Thanks April
Date: 7/23/2013 12:57:00 PM
It's a beautiful style to attack from the back door. Lovely done, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2013 2:06:00 PM
Thanks bl, much appreciated.
Date: 7/23/2013 9:26:00 AM
A fabulous story indeed! Written by a gifted master of his craft!...Milt
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2013 9:27:00 AM
Thanks milt, I am smiling.;0)
Date: 7/22/2013 11:01:00 PM
Whoa Richard! You've just made my day. You're crazy good... and you're giving me ideas(I wonder do you spook easily?)ha ha ha! I love the poem. You, my friend, are a wonderful gift.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2013 7:03:00 AM
I am thrilled you enjoyed it. Birthed by your soup mail to me.
Date: 7/22/2013 6:22:00 PM
You yourself are a storyteller extraordinaire, Richard. I muuuchly enjoyed this one. Nice one, my friend. Licia :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/22/2013 6:44:00 PM
Thanks Licia. Nice to see your smiling face.
Date: 7/22/2013 7:00:00 AM
:) You told this story like a story teller extraordinaire! Reminds me of how my brothers used to tell ghost stories and scare me half to death. I'm NOT into scary stuff...movies, thrillers....I'm a scardy cat! Vicky must be pleased!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2013 7:05:00 AM
Ha Ha I'm a bit slow!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/23/2013 6:26:00 AM
:) Thanks! I was quoting the line of your poem back to you, Richard! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/22/2013 11:46:00 AM
no one would think of you as having a little mind.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/22/2013 10:37:00 AM
BOOO....yea...my little mind failed the test too! ;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/22/2013 7:39:00 AM
Ha ha, hope I didn't scare you to badly.
Date: 7/21/2013 9:51:00 PM
Oh Nothing like Ghost Stories, Rich: Very gripping tale. SuZ
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/22/2013 7:39:00 AM
Thanks SuZ
Date: 7/21/2013 8:57:00 PM
Exceptional! Enjoyed this completely, from start to finish! Could this be the start of a book, Richard?? Could be!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/22/2013 7:40:00 AM
Not really a spooky story teller although I am a Stephen King fan.
Date: 7/21/2013 4:12:00 PM
What a fantastic tale! This seriously had me in a trance. Spectacular job!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/21/2013 4:22:00 PM
Thanks Drake, glad you enjoyed.
Date: 7/21/2013 3:24:00 PM
You brought me a smile with this, a very interesting read. And arrrr! Thanks for stopping by matey! :o)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/21/2013 4:23:00 PM
Ho Ho Ho and a bottle a rum matey. Thanks for commenting Dan
Date: 7/21/2013 2:38:00 PM
I really, really, liked this one. It pulled me right into it with power. I will try to do one for your contest. My thoughts are to scrambled. Love Colleen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/21/2013 2:41:00 PM
Thanks Colleen
Date: 7/21/2013 1:43:00 PM
this is eerily fine, rich... enjoyed the phrasing and development of the theme... :) hugggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/21/2013 2:42:00 PM
I had fun writing this one.

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