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Story of My Life

The story of my life, empty, a vase filled with wilted flowers; leaving a trail passing by slowly like a swollen snail; extracted, drawn firmly upon my face. Echoes of age with such depth of your love written within dreams, a-dream built on bricks I've been clinging on so tight as time ticks; all lie with crowns of stones, leaves clinch above. Once, the story of my life with grand sprays of bloom, now taken by wind through a maze. 9/28/2019

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Date: 10/6/2019 11:58:00 AM
So much sadness but yet so beautiful! Congratulations on your win Eve :-) x
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Date: 10/5/2019 12:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 10/4/2019 9:38:00 PM
Congratulations and this is a beauty. Bless you always, Gina
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Date: 10/4/2019 5:23:00 PM
Congrats Eve on your first place win with this sad but true to life poem.
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Date: 10/4/2019 4:42:00 PM
Wow! Eve, This is such deep piece of poetry. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/4/2019 4:37:00 PM
Congrats on your top win...echoes of age with such depth...
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Date: 10/4/2019 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win Eve! :)
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Date: 10/4/2019 3:18:00 PM
- Congratulations on your top 1st place in the contest, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2019 2:28:00 PM
You poem bleeds sadness, life is never the same when we lose a loved love... deep and emotive poetry at its best and in ten lines also... Congratulations on your first place in the contest.
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Date: 9/28/2019 11:43:00 PM
I am still wondering about this contest. A life in ten lines is an impossibility. Hugs.
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Date: 9/28/2019 11:41:00 PM
This is awesome and I enjoyed it tremendously... very "poetic" indeed. God bless you
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Date: 9/28/2019 9:15:00 PM
Eve that was so touching my sweet friend! We done!!
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Date: 9/28/2019 9:12:00 PM
Wow Eve, this entry is exceptional! Intriguing metaphors shine! : ) xxoo
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