Stormy Dawn

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Roaring thunder shatters the dawn As rain tumbles down from the sky From slumber I wake as I yawn Roaring thunder shatters the dawn Dark clouds are the brew of its spawn Lightning flashes a quick reply Roaring thunder shatters the dawn As rain tumbles down from the sky -- 8/22/17

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Heidi Sands

Date: 8/22/2017 6:38:00 PM

This poem is like it has a drum beat with it! I like it! and I feel like I am there experiencing it too. Well done Joseph :) I have to check out this form. Never tried it. Good luck in the contest.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/22/2017 4:12:00 PM

Hi Joseph, a beautiful write, I can hear, see and feel your storm darkened dawn! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/22/2017 4:04:00 PM

Good rhythm, depicting the stormy down--well done--good luck for the contest!