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Storms Over Blue Waters

One meets at first And love can bloom Or its love at first site Potential bride and groom Two paths join Unite as one The future of two Has just begun A few years pass And cracks appear Where two are to blame Or one less sincere Many reasons Can lead to this Ignorance Or with a strangers kiss Bullying Or even being shunned Distraught victims Their hearts in stun Marital vows Can be as strong as steel But amidst the turmoil Do they still feel so real Passing thoughts From day to day Will either reignite Or its seperate ways http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-7.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/7/2010 11:20:00 PM
This poem..I missed this poem and am glad i found it.. its so deep..so real... so true.. and the ending.. reigniting or going seperate ways..guess there s never the in between path..that would be only an act..great great poem,another for mt favs..Charma
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Date: 4/7/2010 2:51:00 PM
Yes, I guess more and more, it's separate ways for most folks. Thanks for your recent comment, James. LUv,andrea
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Date: 4/7/2010 1:39:00 PM
my husband says love at second sight, enjoyed.
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Date: 4/7/2010 1:38:00 PM
A write that matches up with what life issues sometimes...There are always solutions to help keep a marriage alive..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/7/2010 8:32:00 AM
A wonderful read. Enjoyed thank you.
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Date: 4/7/2010 5:59:00 AM
Love needs nuturing to stay alive. Beautifully written and expressed, James. Lainie
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Date: 4/6/2010 10:51:00 PM
That is life and noone can avoid it
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Date: 4/6/2010 4:04:00 PM
Yes James ... reignite or separate ways indeed... I have chosen the latter with my long time romance so your words hit home so very well... so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/6/2010 3:40:00 PM
enjoyed--ever watchful of something slipping up. to ruin the good life. interesting ideas.
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Date: 4/6/2010 1:33:00 PM
Sad...this scenario is repeated time and time again in life....great write, James....Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/6/2010 11:45:00 AM
Well done James, I can relate to this piece..BG
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Date: 4/6/2010 10:29:00 AM
You've really captured life's torment.
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Date: 4/6/2010 10:17:00 AM
beautifully written, I can relate to this one. Have a wonderful day James, Francine
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